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Old June 10th, 2015, 06:32 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

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I believe this is where the design stands.
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SURPRISE ATTACK
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Admiral Ozzel in which he attacked an opponent's figure, you may reveal the "X" Order Marker on this card and roll the 20-sided die.
•If you roll 1-10, you may take a turn with one Common Squad you control that follows the Galactic Empire. All opponent's figures attacked during this turn may add 2 dice to their defense.
•If you roll 11-20, you may take a turn with up to 2 Common Squads you control who follow the Galactic Empire. All figures you control may add 2 to their move for this turn. Figures may only take a turn once each time Surprise Attack is used.
@SirGalahad - if you are available, would you take a look at the wording?

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Old June 10th, 2015, 07:21 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

Have more than one 'X' while using Co-op rules, they can.
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Old June 13th, 2015, 12:43 AM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

So with Sir G's suggested change from "the X order marker" to "an X order marker" we have:

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ADMIRAL OZZEL
Galactic Empire

Human
Unique Hero
Admiral
Overconfident
Medium 5

4 Life
5 Move
6 Range
2 Attack
2 Defense
70 points

SURPRISE ATTACK
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Admiral Ozzel in which he attacked an opponent's figure, you may reveal an 'X' Order Marker on this card and roll the 20-sided die.
•If you roll 1-10, you may take a turn with one Common Squad you control that follows the Galactic Empire. All opponent's figures attacked during this turn may add 2 dice to their defense.
•If you roll 11-20, you may take a turn with up to 2 Common Squads you control who follow the Galactic Empire. All figures you control may add 2 to their move for this turn. Figures may only take a turn once each time Surprise Attack is used.
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Old June 13th, 2015, 12:54 AM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

In the first clause, we write out "one common squad." In the second clause, we use the number "2 common squads." I think we should write out the number both times.
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Old June 13th, 2015, 09:18 AM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

For 11-20 it says "may add 2 to their move for this turn." The squads are taking individual turns and the boost is singular. It is also unclear because it could reference Ozzel's turn, since it never mentions the squads.

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Old June 16th, 2015, 05:29 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

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In the first clause, we write out "one common squad." In the second clause, we use the number "2 common squads." I think we should write out the number both times.
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Old June 16th, 2015, 05:33 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

So this is where we're at then. I believe all we need now is a card update then a vote to finalize.

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ADMIRAL OZZEL
Galactic Empire

Human
Unique Hero
Admiral
Overconfident
Medium 5

4 Life
5 Move
6 Range
2 Attack
2 Defense
70 points

SURPRISE ATTACK
After revealing an Order Marker on this card and taking a turn with Admiral Ozzel in which he attacked an opponent's figure, you may reveal an 'X' Order Marker on this card and roll the 20-sided die.
•If you roll 1-10, you may take a turn with one Common Squad you control that follows the Galactic Empire. All opponent's figures attacked during this turn may add 2 dice to their defense.
•If you roll 11-20, you may take a turn with up to two Common Squads you control who follow the Galactic Empire. All figures you control may add 2 to their move for this turn. Figures may only take a turn once each time Surprise Attack is used.
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Old June 16th, 2015, 08:00 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

I've come up with a solution for what I said previously.

The simple fix would be:
If you roll 11-20, you may take a turn with up to two Common Squads you control who follow the Galactic Empire. Figures taking a turn with Surprise Attack may add 2 to their move for their turn. blah blah blah

"Surprise Attack" could also be replaced with "this power" since I believe that's HoSS precedent.

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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

How about:

Figures moved using Surprise Attack may add 2 to their move.






I don't know...we've got a SirG seal of approval. I guess I'm ready to move on with what we've got.
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Old June 19th, 2015, 07:11 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

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How about:

Figures moved using Surprise Attack may add 2 to their move.
That's better than my version.

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Old June 24th, 2015, 02:47 PM
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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

A-v's version with Porkins' edit



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Re: The Holocron of Admiral Ozzel

Looks good to me. Pre for release.
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