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Old March 14th, 2017, 01:04 PM
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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)(Vote for Release)
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The bio has some tense consistency issues and could use a little editing I think:

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When Victor Stone's father broke his promise and missed yet another one of his son's games, Victor visited his father's workplace at S.T.A.R. Labs. There, Silas Stone and his fellow scientists were working on the Mother Box that Superman came in contact with after his battle with the Parademon. The Mother Box exploded, destroying most of Victor's body and killing all the scientists except Victor's father. Silas Stone did all he could for Victor's survival and used the energies from the Mother Box to give Victor a new form as Cyborg! Cyborg inadvertently absorbed some of the Parademon's components, giving him access to Boom Tube technology. This new ability automatically teleported Victor to where Batman, Green Lantern, Superman, Flash, Wonder Woman, and Aquaman were currently stationed. Together, the newly formed team prevented Darkseid's assault on the Earth and, with the help of Cyborg's Boom Tube, send Darkseid back to Apokolips. Cyborg and the others formed the Justice League and now fight to protect the world from all those who may do it harm.
The bits in blue are slight conjectures on my part, as I'm not entirely certain what happened in the stories. The original sentences weren't clear. Once the bio issues get worked out, Yea from me.
Looks like there's also an "all" missing; I added it in red above.
Just making sure @bsbush7690 is aware of this.

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Old March 14th, 2017, 03:51 PM
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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)(Vote for Release)
[MENTION=34478]TrollBrute[/MENTION] and [MENTION=11724]Viegon[/MENTION] updated the wording and cleared some of it up.
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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)(Vote for Release)
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@TrollBrute and @Viegon updated the wording and cleared some of it up.
It still reads weirdly to me because the tense isn't consistent throughout. Incorporating some of the fixes you made into TB and V's suggestion, I'd consider something like this:

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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)(Vote for Release)
He didn't post, but it looks like bsbush updated the bio last night, so it's safe to say that this passes. Cyborg is officially released!

(I'll update his synergies later if no-one else gets to it)

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He didn't post, but it looks like bsbush updated the bio last night, so it's safe to say that this passes. Cyborg is officially released!

(I'll update his synergies later if no-one else gets to it)

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So... is this guy released? No one but you seems to have noticed. I'm confused.

Calling @bsbush7690 and @TrollBrute (who seems to be in charge of general release organisation? I think?) for confirmation.

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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)(Vote for Release)
There was a vote to release, it passed, he's released.

Haven't updated the thread title or put him in The Books yet because I've been busy dealing with a few feet of snow.
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There was a vote to release, it passed, he's released.

Haven't updated the thread title or put him in The Books yet because I've been busy dealing with a few feet of snow.
Okay, thank you - just confused me since none of the heroes or the LD seems to have noticed yet.

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Nice job on wrapping up the JL here. I think the Avengers are a bit jealous at how cool the JL markers work.
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Avengers 2.0!!!!!!
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Avengers 2.0!!!!!!
The Avengers are fine - they just need more leaders, and that's not super desperate.

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Re: The Book of Cyborg (Vic Stone) (II)
Pretty sure T was just being sarcastic there but yeah I wouldn't try to reengineer the Avengers markers at all. I'd welcome another Iron Man card that did something with Avengers markers though.
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Really you would just need a new mechanic for a couple cards like the JL.
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