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Old September 10th, 2007, 11:07 AM
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Rise of Melchazar

3000 years ago a demon named Melchazar terrorized the land of Valhalla he was 100ft tall, body of a gargoyle, and horns of a ram. His body was awash with the flames of E'rEthnaiel, the land of shadow. He then dissapeared, he passed into legend, into myth, into shadow, and was buried in the abyss of time.

Chapter 1
A silent shadow slipped through the night, as silent as a cat, the little shadow seemingly fells through a crack in the ground. The robed figure stood infront of a hulking figure, "Melchazar........Melchazar........AWAKEN. I have done your bidding master." Two red eyes snapped open, the titan began to stir, there was a deafening roar as the figure flamed to life, the searing heat melted the rock around it, the sound of crackling and roaring resonated throughout the cave, Melchazar had returned.

Chapter 2
The roaring mass of flame rose to it's full height, a demonic talon snagged the robed man and lifted him to see Melchazar eye to eye, "You have succeeded in finding the amulets?" Y-yyes sir, they are in the wellsprings, but there is a war in preogress over the amulets." Melchazar started to squeeze the man very tightly. "Easy, I will just have to kill them." "Sssir what is my reward." "This is your reward." a crack echoed through the cave, Melchazar flung the ans limp body into a wall.

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Old September 10th, 2007, 02:06 PM
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Old September 10th, 2007, 06:53 PM
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Do I hear crickets, (oh **** I killed the section)

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Old September 11th, 2007, 04:43 PM
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.................................heh heh heh........

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Old September 11th, 2007, 04:48 PM
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Old September 11th, 2007, 05:23 PM
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it will get more heroscapey next chapter.

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Old September 11th, 2007, 05:31 PM
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I like you new avatar!

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Old September 12th, 2007, 04:47 PM
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Not bad but very short. Add more and you are bound to get people to read it and comment.
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Chapters are usually longer than 2 or 3 sentences.
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Old September 13th, 2007, 12:04 AM
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Your writing is way too cliche.

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Re: Rise of Melchazar

EPIC Necro-time. Can I steal these names? From this fan-fic? Because this guy hasn't posted since 2007.

I swear I just stumbled on this. Innocent thread surfing.

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