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[Heroscaper 101]

Originally Posted by TREX

Here you go @Heroscaper 101


I also have this miniature. I like the card ok, just not a fan of his name. Also, not sure why his normal attack is so low. I'd make it the same as his special at a 4, making the player only opt to use it against a squad figure on height. or against an iron golem or something.

I changed his name to Slash from Razor Blood-edge. His stats are 8 life, 5 move, 1 range, 4 attack and 1 defense. The troll still has the Regenerate power, but I changed his Rending Swipe attack power to Bladed Frenzy. This new power is a Whirlwind Assault power for this troll. Hope you enjoy this new Army Card or something.

[MrNobody]

[Heroscaper 101]

I changed the troll again, he does not have regenerate. He can heal himself with every figure Xul'drek destroys with a normal or special attack. The point cost is 140, he can regenerate quicker than the average Toril Troll.

[MrNobody]

Honestly the powers and name seem more fit for a vampire than anything else. They’re also just very small variations on Whirlwind Assault and Life Drain.

Heroscaper 101, it does feel like you’re abusing this thread again, and hurting everyone else in the process. I’m sorry to say this, but if you post an entirely new power set in this thread without it going in your customs thread first, I will not respond or help. It seems like most of the others have the same philosophy.

Decide on a solid power-set in your customs thread. We will help you there. And once you have a power set you like, you don’t need to keep making completely new ones.

[superfrog]

Rending Whirlwind is cool enough.

Blade Frenzy is not a good name for a life-drain power, and a life-drain power is a bad fit for a non-magical troll.

Earlier versions of this unit were better.

[TREX]

I liked rending swipe with regenerate. A better name would be suitable. A 4 attack normal to go along with the special of 4 worked. It was looking decent before the revamp before this last revamp. I agree with @MrNobody that wildly changing designs over and over isnt a good tactic if you seriously want help. I really liked how skalmad turned out. The fact that he doesnt have enough availability to be sov is just fine for a good custom. I do have the bladerager troll mini as well along with the war troll and mountain troll. Id be super happy with your designs to print them out for use if you didnt so radically change them.

[Heroscaper 101]

This is not ordinary your ordinary troll, he can attack multiple figures in one turn. The Feral Troll is strong against figures with wound markers, but Xul'drek can attack multiple figures, just as long as he is surrounded. Got rid of his Rending Swipe Special Attack for Blade Frenzy which makes him able to attack multiple figures. Here is the army card for this new Bladerager Troll.

[Scytale]

I like this direction more, because this guy is much more anti-squad as opposed to the anti-hero Feral Troll.

The 120pt space is pretty crowded with really good units. Personally I'd rather see you drop this guy to 3 attack and lower his price.

[flameslayer93]

Originally Posted by Heroscaper 101

This is not ordinary your ordinary troll, he can attack multiple figures in one turn. The Feral Troll is strong against figures with wound markers, but Xul'drek can attack multiple figures, just as long as he is surrounded. Got rid of his Rending Swipe Special Attack for Blade Frenzy which makes him able to attack multiple figures. Here is the army card for this new Bladerager Troll.

It’s a solid design. Looks similar to my rendition of it (but without Spider synergy).
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_k...JoNndxUWM/view

As is, your troll is solid. I wouldn’t say SoV-worthy, but certainly solid.

[Heroscaper 101]

I changed Xul'drek attack to 3 from 4 and his point is 105 now.

[Astroking112]

What kind of feedback are you looking for? You've gotten a ton already, and it looked to me like you were just going to playtest at this point. I think it helps when seeking outside opinions to at least mention what kinds of things you're looking for.

[MrNobody]

I agree that playtesting is really the next move.