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Old February 6th, 2016, 11:21 AM
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Re: Help With Wurdz
Just flip it around, so the subject of the power is the target, instead of the medic in question:

Medpack 15
If a Space Marine, Firebat or Medic you control is adjacent to one or more [friendly?] Medics and receives one or more wounds and would be destroyed, roll the 20-sided die before removing that figure. If you roll a 15 or higher, ignore any wounds.

You could also consider dropping the "would be destroyed" clause to reduce the wordiness further. I like the use of the word "friendly" there. That would allow medics to help your teammates, too, in a team game, and it would mean you don't have to use the "you control" language twice in the same power.

There are other ways to simplify, too. Thoughts so far?
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