Thread: The Book of Negative Man
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Old October 11th, 2019, 11:45 AM
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Re: The Book of Negative Man (Breathing Period)
Heroscape language wise, it looks good. You could probably shorten some of the phrases to this card instead of Army Card, but we have precedent for both so I'll leave that up to you. The Negative spirit gets the same feedback. The one thing I thought I caught was covered on the spirit. I can go through it a little latter with our capitalization guide to see 8f anything sticks out.
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