Thread: A New Threat-Final Chapter
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Old December 2nd, 2008, 11:54 PM
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Re: A New Threat-Chapter 11
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Originally Posted by EternalThanos86 View Post
I like it. You could use a bit more descriptive language, but the overall tone and direction the story is heading seems to flow well. Kudos to you A-bomb.
~ET86
I'll try to work on the descriptiveness, and thanks for telling me that the story is flowing well. I was afraid that it'd be like my previous Fan fic.
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