Re: Peregrin (Pippin) - Rough Draft
I like the direction a lot. Swear Fealty definitely represents how Pippin (& Merry) fought.
For Swear Fealty, what would you think about requiring it to be a Jandar figure as well? Then Merry would get Swear Fealty with Einar allegiance. Would be a bit more thematic to me.
I'm not necessarily convinced that Swear Fealty should be a full turn; maybe just movement? There's an argument for both. Just wanted to throw it out there as a thought for now.
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