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Old April 16th, 2020, 01:45 PM
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Re: The Book of Captain Atom

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Originally Posted by johnny139 View Post
I agree with Karat's re-write there, if we're fine dropping the auto-destroy stuff. That's an LD decision, but I agree it would streamline things a lot.

For Atomic Form, I'd agree with SirG and drop the "at the same time," but I wouldn't change Quantum Absorption at all. We're not hurting for space and I don't mind the extra clarity.
I think the way it is currently worded is a bit confusing so I'll modify it slightly to be slightly more clear.
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