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Old February 29th, 2012, 01:28 AM
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Re: My Book: War of the Wizard

I've been debating with myself on the format of this excerpt and subsequently the first chapter in general.

Currently, the book stands at 24 chapters (it was originally 25, but I moved the last chapter to be the prologue of the sequel, The Wizard's Curse). That aside, I'm debating whether to divide the above excerpt so some of it makes up a prologue. Logically, I wonder if the bit with The Wizard's soldier should act as the prologue, with the bit about Lendlelott's mother starting chapter 1. Or should I keep the excerpt as is, having it all act as the prologue?

As potential readers, what would you suggest in terms of this format adjustment?
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