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Re: The Book of Trunks (Future)

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Originally Posted by Sporx View Post
I am looking at Syvarris’s “Double Attack” and Wildcat’s “The Ol’ One-Two.” They both use “one additional time…” So, here are two options, one with bullets, one without:

SHINING SWORD ATTACK

After Trunks attacks an adjacent figure with his normal attack, if at least one skull was rolled, he may attack one additional time, either with his normal attack against an adjacent figure, rolling 1 fewer attack die, or with his Burning Attack Special Attack.

OR

SHINING SWORD ATTACK
After Trunks attacks an adjacent figure with his normal attack, if at least one skull was rolled, he may attack one additional time, either:
• with his normal attack against an adjacent figure, rolling 1 fewer attack die; or
• with his Burning Attack Special Attack.

If it is without bullets, then I think the Burning Attack should be listed second, so that people don’t read the “1 fewer attack die” to apply to both options. Also, in the bullet points version, there shouldn’t be a comma after “or.” Some of the earlier drafts have that extra comma.

Thoughts?
This is the best version yet but the "one additional" limits it to just one additional when it is not currently and therefore it should be "again"
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