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Nice. I like the stop and re-start. Seems to add depth. ... In fact, I like your back story better than the original, but that's just me.
I also think that Einar is more nuetral than Vydar, but that's also just me.
~Neko: Leaving, sadly. I hope to see you all around. =^-^=
Making Custom Fixes for Heroscape Once more, I will say my camera hates me.
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