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Re: The Book of Demona

For one thing, I'm not sure why we'd state what happens during the spell, before we list what happens before casting the spell. What I proposed places it in a more logical order in that regard. Other than that, there's really no issue other than following wording precedent from prior powers such as how Iron Fist works.
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