Thread: The Book of Mera
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Old March 9th, 2015, 11:49 AM
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Re: The Book of Mera (Design Phase)
Looking good mechanically speaking, but I preferred Aquakinesis as two separate powers; it read more smoothly to me with the Water Strength (or Water Strength-ish, as it stands now) part separated from the rest of the power. The bulk of the text is all about the placement/wounding power, and it feels like it should stand on its own.
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