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Old December 1st, 2008, 12:12 AM
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Re: Need input..my first custom

OK since this is your largest thread, I'm putting my comments here.

PLEASE, DO NOT make a thread for every custom you create. Just change the title and post it in the first and last posts to let people know you have a new creation. It clears up the forum from a crazy number of threads. I know the threads here move slow, but it still is courtesy to keep your creations in one post. Thank you.

GRAVITRON
- I'd lose the Mad and just have Scientist. More generic for bonuses and Mad is a personality really. I do like Vengeful, always have.
- Gravatic Force Bolt SA, I would add a little clarification, "If this attack inflicts at least one wound on a figure, you may move the affected figures and all adjacent figures the amount of spaces equal to the number of wounds."
- Can you move Gravatron/friendly figures/figures you control with Gravatic Force? or is it only enemies? As worded you canmove EVERYONE.
- I would say space instead of hex for Gravity Control. Just more official.
- For more clarity, change "on a roll..." to "If you roll a 13 or higher, remove all Order Markers on any figures' Army Cards within three spaces of the chosen space."
- Again Gravity Control affects even your own figures and Gravitron. I like your own figures, not so much that it affects Gravitron.
- I would reword Criminal Instability to "Before moving, roll the 20
-sided die. If you roll a 19 or 20, immediately end this turn."
- Points are almost impossible to say. He's good for sure, but I think 420 is definitely on the too high end. I would drop them.
- I like him, very unique. Only my two questions about who those abilities affect, but for a first custom fantastic job!


I have comments for the others, but it's late here now so it will have to wait until tomorrow.

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