Chapter Sixteen is now live! The tale comes a conclusion.
I'd be grateful if, once you've finished reading, you could give me your thoughts on the fiction as a whole. What did you like or dislike? Were there any strengths/weaknesses you noted? Particularly for this fiction, how were the twists? Could you see them coming? Was there not enough set up, meaning they seemed to come out of the blue? Or were they surprising yet logical? Your comments and criticisms make my writing better.
Thanks for reading!
~TGRF.