Thread: The Curse of Feylund
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Old April 15th, 2022, 12:31 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
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Originally Posted by AMIS View Post
Quick note:
Avoid parenthesis whenever possible. It's a great tool when writing an essay or an email but can through readers off a fiction.

Spoiler Alert!


At Chapter 14. Very good story.
The use of parentheses are I believe a stylistic choice. While I can't find any examples off the top of my head, I'm sure several well-published authors use them.

That is of course irrelevant if they throw readers off. I myself do not mind them when reading, but if they're something which can throw readers then it might be good practice to avoid them. I'll look into public sentiment on them.

~TGRF.
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