Oh great, just what I need: competition.
Certainly surprised by the use of 1st person, indeed. Good start. Interested to see where things will go with the lack of familiar powers on Valhalla now. Although evil robots seem to be a recurring theme in TGRF stories so I have my suspicions. But twists are the name of the game here, so we'll see.
~TAF, who will +rep you for the invis indent once he's spread enough around