Interesting. I like the design, especially that she can work with Executioner - having read their bios, it always felt weird to me that they were actively
bad picks together. Really cool to see the Hypnotised personality get more use - it kind of feels like that could be a really helpful keyword down the line.
My only criticism would be that, other than its bonuses which are cool (and she'll definitely appreciate Hypnotising someone), it's extremely generic - it's hard to get me excited about temporary mind control without a twist considering how much of it is already in the game, and there isn't much else she does except bond with a big guy, which, admittedly, is nice.