Thread: The Book of Detective Montoya
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Old December 22nd, 2020, 04:45 PM
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Re: The Book of Detective Montoya - Final Editing
Only a very nitpicky thing, otherwise looks good. I'd switch tje order of Criminal and Crime Lord in Criminal Negotiation because I think it flows better. No big deal either way though.
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