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Old September 28th, 2019, 09:00 PM
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Re: Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund

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Originally Posted by TheAverageFan View Post
Keeping up, although I continue to bounce back and forth between my hedged bets on where the story's going. Right now I think the Dark Elves are clearly not evil at this point, but I still think Eltuthar is gonna turn out to be bad. The council--however antagonistic towards our hero--doesn't have enough named characters to house a main villain right now. If age = power in this universe, Eltuthar's gonna be pretty darned strong if he gets his limiter removed. And then he'll turn out to be an a-hole or something.

Also there's a weird typo in Ch. 19:
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In just four days, he had begun drawing all attention back to himself2036, until he had nearly killed Aldir.
Perhaps it's a skim-check to see if the reader's really reading

~TAF
Pretty strange. It was in the Word document too. Fixed now, thanks.



As for the rest of it:



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