Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
Yesterday, 03:26 PM
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Re: TGRF's Tales of Valhalla
This next entry, posted sometime late in 2017, was the first entry where I had to significantly edit something to make it fit within the word limit. While I originally didn't want to do this,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
Yesterday, 03:17 PM
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Re: TGRF's Tales of Valhalla
In light of TAF deciding to drunkenly make the rounds of unrated fictions and bless them with a number from 1-10, I have decided to bolster my chances with him and add some of my better entries to...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
Yesterday, 03:04 PM
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May 23rd, 2022, 04:29 PM
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May 23rd, 2022, 03:54 PM
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May 18th, 2022, 11:04 PM
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May 11th, 2022, 07:30 PM
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May 11th, 2022, 01:37 PM
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May 7th, 2022, 03:08 PM
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May 5th, 2022, 02:44 PM
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May 2nd, 2022, 12:32 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 17th, 2022, 12:51 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Ah, I see what you're getting at now. Yes, that is legitimately something to avoid.
I did this same thing in the first story, and intend to do it in the third story. You need a wrap up chapter,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 16th, 2022, 02:16 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Response to TAF:
The traitor in question is a toss up between Aldir and Denethor (now you got me doing it), depending on who's point of view you're looking at. I like to leave little questions like...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 15th, 2022, 12:52 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Yes, Ilrin has no defense against Dilmir's magic. The Council certainly has a point about what Dilmir could do or become; I don't think anyone is questioning that.
I do have trouble ascertaining...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 15th, 2022, 12:31 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
The use of parentheses are I believe a stylistic choice. While I can't find any examples off the top of my head, I'm sure several well-published authors use them.
That is of course irrelevant if...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2022, 06:44 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
I realize I made a mistake, and never explained in the book how Alfimir/Elmir were able to counter the Asdelarcen spells. That was supposed to be a question asked by Dilmir, but the scene where the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2022, 12:42 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2022, 12:21 AM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
No, both Inilidin and Endir are new characters. Also I apologize about the similarity in Elven naming conventions. That's a carry-over from the originals - a lot of the names were way too similar.
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 13th, 2022, 06:51 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Chapter one definitely takes place in the present. One of my struggles is how to denote when something happens in the past/future without breaking the fourth wall... although the connections you drew...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 06:37 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
The recap should do a pretty good job of conveying everything essential, and there is a bit of recap in the story itself. It's the little details which aren't covered - but being the author I can't...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 01:54 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
TheAverageFan AMIS William099
The Curse of Feylund, the sequel to Dilmir, is now live! Note that the whole thing is posted, as I explain above. You're free to read as much or as little as you...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 01:48 PM
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The Curse of Feylund
Greetings readers and writers, and welcome to the second installment of the Feylund Trilogy: The Curse of Feylund. I've been working on this one for some time, but now it's finally written,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 2nd, 2022, 02:24 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
Hmm, so it seems that my own concerns of having too much in addition to the zombies is actually a boon to readers like yourself. The undead only represent 1/3rd of the external threats of the story,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 31st, 2022, 05:43 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
AMIS As one who enjoys using zombies and vampires as antagonists in his writing, I'm kind of curious what you don't like about them, and what kept you coming back to this story despite that. Would be...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 29th, 2022, 08:11 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
O_o 14 TAF-length chapters in two days? Hopefully you are enjoying it at that pace, especially if you do not normally enjoy zombie stuff. Feel free to let me know if you have any feedback, thoughts,...
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