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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 18th, 2022, 11:04 PM
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Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

I do applaud your effort to stick with it. I certainly wouldn't have lasted this long. You're doing some good - if drunken - work here, keeping the fiction forum alive. Keep it up!

~TGRF, who...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 11th, 2022, 07:30 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,106
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

You'll hafta do that on your own thread Tornado raids the Forbidden Section; we're barely avoiding the ban hammer in here as it is. :lol:

~TAF[/QUOTE]
I feel like I'm way more excited about that...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 11th, 2022, 01:37 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,106
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

So first off, it looks like you reviewed First Encounters once already, and I merely neglected to update the index, although I recorded your vote. Not sure how that happened. But for what's it's...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 7th, 2022, 03:08 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,106
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

It's actually pretty amazing to me that dragonfire9788 could ever turn out something so... low caliber (the part of me closest to understanding new writers keeps me from saying 'bad').

DF has...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 5th, 2022, 02:44 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,106
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

TGRF, explain for the rest of us what this means, please. Moving on.[/QUOTE]
The 'Are you the best writer?' thread in question is in fact the competition. Therefore I can only assume that Dralvon...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction May 2nd, 2022, 12:32 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,106
Re: Drunkenly Reviewing Every Low-Rated & Unranked Fiction h

I find myself oddly looking forward to more ratings.

If you're going to start on unranked fictions next, I would suggest PK's Having a Marvelous Time, and BassistofDoom's Zombies: The End. PK is...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 17th, 2022, 12:51 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

Ah, I see what you're getting at now. Yes, that is legitimately something to avoid.

I did this same thing in the first story, and intend to do it in the third story. You need a wrap up chapter,...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 16th, 2022, 02:16 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

Response to TAF:
The traitor in question is a toss up between Aldir and Denethor (now you got me doing it), depending on who's point of view you're looking at. I like to leave little questions like...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 15th, 2022, 12:52 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

Yes, Ilrin has no defense against Dilmir's magic. The Council certainly has a point about what Dilmir could do or become; I don't think anyone is questioning that.

I do have trouble ascertaining...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 15th, 2022, 12:31 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

The use of parentheses are I believe a stylistic choice. While I can't find any examples off the top of my head, I'm sure several well-published authors use them.

That is of course irrelevant if...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 14th, 2022, 06:44 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

I realize I made a mistake, and never explained in the book how Alfimir/Elmir were able to counter the Asdelarcen spells. That was supposed to be a question asked by Dilmir, but the scene where the...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 14th, 2022, 12:42 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

Glad you're enjoying it! I look forward to your thoughts as you progress.

~TGRF.
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 14th, 2022, 12:21 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

No, both Inilidin and Endir are new characters. Also I apologize about the similarity in Elven naming conventions. That's a carry-over from the originals - a lot of the names were way too similar.
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 13th, 2022, 06:51 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

Chapter one definitely takes place in the present. One of my struggles is how to denote when something happens in the past/future without breaking the fourth wall... although the connections you drew...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 12th, 2022, 06:37 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

The recap should do a pretty good job of conveying everything essential, and there is a bit of recap in the story itself. It's the little details which aren't covered - but being the author I can't...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 12th, 2022, 01:54 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Re: The Curse of Feylund

TheAverageFan AMIS William099

The Curse of Feylund, the sequel to Dilmir, is now live! Note that the whole thing is posted, as I explain above. You're free to read as much or as little as you...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 12th, 2022, 01:48 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 828
Post The Curse of Feylund

Greetings readers and writers, and welcome to the second installment of the Feylund Trilogy: The Curse of Feylund. I've been working on this one for some time, but now it's finally written,...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction April 2nd, 2022, 02:24 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

Hmm, so it seems that my own concerns of having too much in addition to the zombies is actually a boon to readers like yourself. The undead only represent 1/3rd of the external threats of the story,...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 31st, 2022, 05:43 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

AMIS As one who enjoys using zombies and vampires as antagonists in his writing, I'm kind of curious what you don't like about them, and what kept you coming back to this story despite that. Would be...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 29th, 2022, 08:11 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

O_o 14 TAF-length chapters in two days? Hopefully you are enjoying it at that pace, especially if you do not normally enjoy zombie stuff. Feel free to let me know if you have any feedback, thoughts,...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 26th, 2022, 03:59 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - TGRF's Exhaustive Review

So I have this morning finished reading, and after gathering my thoughts for a couple of hours, am ready to commence with the review.

I'm going to break this down into a few sections, and then...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 23rd, 2022, 09:31 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

So I've read through chapter 21 and have some thoughts:
There's two criticisms I have, one a lot bigger than the other. I know, I know, criticisms again. :roll: But you've still got me hooked...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 22nd, 2022, 05:06 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

It definitely has a feel to it I like, but can't really describe. Something about zombie stories just seem to get me for some reason, and yours definitely has that feel to it. Just reading this made...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 21st, 2022, 06:04 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

I've read through chapter 16. However, I did so on my phone, so I wasn't able to note grammar stuff for 13-16. Nothing out of the ordinary.

Generally, in what zombie movies I've seen, once the...
Forum: Fan Art & Fiction March 19th, 2022, 09:02 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 15,303
Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story

Now through chapter 13.

Some thoughts and further speculation:
To be honest this is starting to remind me a lot about the SYLO Chronicles by D J MacHale. That wasn't a zombie story - though it...
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