Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
May 18th, 2022, 11:04 PM
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May 11th, 2022, 07:30 PM
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May 11th, 2022, 01:37 PM
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May 7th, 2022, 03:08 PM
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May 5th, 2022, 02:44 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
May 2nd, 2022, 12:32 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 17th, 2022, 12:51 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Ah, I see what you're getting at now. Yes, that is legitimately something to avoid.
I did this same thing in the first story, and intend to do it in the third story. You need a wrap up chapter,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 16th, 2022, 02:16 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Response to TAF:
The traitor in question is a toss up between Aldir and Denethor (now you got me doing it), depending on who's point of view you're looking at. I like to leave little questions like...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 15th, 2022, 12:52 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Yes, Ilrin has no defense against Dilmir's magic. The Council certainly has a point about what Dilmir could do or become; I don't think anyone is questioning that.
I do have trouble ascertaining...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 15th, 2022, 12:31 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
The use of parentheses are I believe a stylistic choice. While I can't find any examples off the top of my head, I'm sure several well-published authors use them.
That is of course irrelevant if...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2022, 06:44 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
I realize I made a mistake, and never explained in the book how Alfimir/Elmir were able to counter the Asdelarcen spells. That was supposed to be a question asked by Dilmir, but the scene where the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2022, 12:42 PM
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April 14th, 2022, 12:21 AM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
No, both Inilidin and Endir are new characters. Also I apologize about the similarity in Elven naming conventions. That's a carry-over from the originals - a lot of the names were way too similar.
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 13th, 2022, 06:51 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
Chapter one definitely takes place in the present. One of my struggles is how to denote when something happens in the past/future without breaking the fourth wall... although the connections you drew...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 06:37 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
The recap should do a pretty good job of conveying everything essential, and there is a bit of recap in the story itself. It's the little details which aren't covered - but being the author I can't...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 01:54 PM
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Re: The Curse of Feylund
TheAverageFan AMIS William099
The Curse of Feylund, the sequel to Dilmir, is now live! Note that the whole thing is posted, as I explain above. You're free to read as much or as little as you...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 12th, 2022, 01:48 PM
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The Curse of Feylund
Greetings readers and writers, and welcome to the second installment of the Feylund Trilogy: The Curse of Feylund. I've been working on this one for some time, but now it's finally written,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 2nd, 2022, 02:24 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
Hmm, so it seems that my own concerns of having too much in addition to the zombies is actually a boon to readers like yourself. The undead only represent 1/3rd of the external threats of the story,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 31st, 2022, 05:43 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
AMIS As one who enjoys using zombies and vampires as antagonists in his writing, I'm kind of curious what you don't like about them, and what kept you coming back to this story despite that. Would be...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 29th, 2022, 08:11 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
O_o 14 TAF-length chapters in two days? Hopefully you are enjoying it at that pace, especially if you do not normally enjoy zombie stuff. Feel free to let me know if you have any feedback, thoughts,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 26th, 2022, 03:59 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - TGRF's Exhaustive Review
So I have this morning finished reading, and after gathering my thoughts for a couple of hours, am ready to commence with the review.
I'm going to break this down into a few sections, and then...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 23rd, 2022, 09:31 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
So I've read through chapter 21 and have some thoughts:
There's two criticisms I have, one a lot bigger than the other. I know, I know, criticisms again. :roll: But you've still got me hooked...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 22nd, 2022, 05:06 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
It definitely has a feel to it I like, but can't really describe. Something about zombie stories just seem to get me for some reason, and yours definitely has that feel to it. Just reading this made...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 21st, 2022, 06:04 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
I've read through chapter 16. However, I did so on my phone, so I wasn't able to note grammar stuff for 13-16. Nothing out of the ordinary.
Generally, in what zombie movies I've seen, once the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 19th, 2022, 09:02 PM
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Re: THE MOON HAS WINGS - a zombie story
Now through chapter 13.
Some thoughts and further speculation:
To be honest this is starting to remind me a lot about the SYLO Chronicles by D J MacHale. That wasn't a zombie story - though it...
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