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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 12th, 2024, 02:01 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
OK done. I'm not gonna lie, I kind of forgot about the most recent prompt and was still thinking of the prequel one. But I've gone over the correct prompt and both stories and have reached my...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 11th, 2024, 04:34 PM
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Forum: Sightings and Sales
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 3rd, 2024, 09:11 AM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 28th, 2024, 12:22 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Wow it only took eight days to reply! I'm getting faster :drool:
I would submit to you this question: what is the purpose of a description? To enable the reader to see what is happening in his...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 20th, 2024, 04:15 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Apologies for the belated reply:
I'm surprised to see the descriptions as a positive given that prose has never been a strong suit of mine whatsoever. Even the descriptions in this that I...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 15th, 2024, 10:18 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Feedback:
Can he though? Honestly at this point I wouldn't be surprised if he misses point blank. [/quote]
You shouldn't start the feedback with a joke because that's when I'm most likely...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 15th, 2024, 05:00 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
All typos have been fixed. Another chapter I just read not too long ago yet still rife with misspellings. I even found an unmentioned typo just going back to fix the others :wtf:
No comment on...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 13th, 2024, 11:36 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
It was more than convenience: it was downright pure luck. Certainly someone can roll a Nat 20 irl, though Gauge in general sort of has something mysterious going on with the fact that he's still...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 31st, 2024, 07:13 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
For starters all typos have been fixed. I just read this chapter not too long ago, I don't know how so many errors survived.
I think the best way to summarize Brooke's principles is that...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 29th, 2024, 08:50 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Feedback feedback:
I could not even begin to say. They are very different characters, and their introduction was so long ago you'd think that relation would've worn off by now.
Stacey...
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Forum: HeroScape General Discussion
January 28th, 2024, 07:52 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 27th, 2024, 04:01 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Fixed, I don't know how I missed that one. I did a Find + Replace check across the whole novel the first time you pointed it out, but I must've missed one somehow
~TAF
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 27th, 2024, 03:49 PM
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Re: Valhalla Fan Art and Fiction Forum Index
I see >_> Is it so similar that you're that worried about it? By removing the stories for this reason you've made it suspicious. Now I effectively know how your novel ends ;)
~TAF
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 26th, 2024, 07:24 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 24th, 2024, 06:26 PM
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Apostle's Creed Final
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Apostle's Creed Final Survivor Count [SPOILERS] Protagonists: Thomas, Thorn, Header, Stacey, Reed, Irene
Others: Nazar, Lavender, Grimm, Tandom, Jaxson, Miles, Abbey, James, Oriel, Henry,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 24th, 2024, 06:16 PM
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Chapter 32
Chapter 32, the final chapter of our story. As said previously it is the shortest chapter of the novel.
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 23rd, 2024, 06:57 PM
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Chapter 31
Chapter 31: the penultimate chapter of Apostle's Creed. We are very nearly at the end. Unfortunately for you it is also one of the longest chapters.
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 23rd, 2024, 06:43 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
She likes Thorn and reluctantly went along with his plan and ended up getting shot fot it. Not a literal betrayal but just a feeling of being hurt because of what Thorn did.
It is the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 22nd, 2024, 05:52 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
I suppose the question then becomes is Thorn the hero? You had said "Now if a side character makes faulty decisions, that's another matter entirely." I'd obviously argue that Thomas is the hero, and...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 22nd, 2024, 02:08 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
I mean, you might be off your rocker given your assumptions. Nothing that I’m aware of in the text so far suggests that what Thorn chose to do was intended as the right decision that the reader...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 21st, 2024, 08:46 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
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All I would say to all of this is that much like Jaxson's selfless absolutism, the events of Apostle's Creed so far call into question whether or not Thorn's dogged pursuit of Silvin...
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