Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
Fair enough! Fwiw I should have something submitted within days/weeks, not months, if that helps.[/QUOTE]
You're good man. We just care about a good contest.[/QUOTE]
Indeed; this'll be the first...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 14th, 2024, 08:00 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 13th, 2024, 05:24 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 9th, 2024, 03:13 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
No deadline. We've had trouble with dropping attendance, and have taken to simply judging when we have no more incoming entries (and have something to judge). Feel free to throw your hat in the ring!...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 4th, 2024, 05:02 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
April 4th, 2024, 04:59 PM
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Re: Valhalla Fan Art and Fiction Forum Index
You, but no one else. It was a calculated decision I made a bit ago, once I knew better what I was dealing with for the novels.
~TGRF.[/QUOTE]
I read through some of the first posts on the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 26th, 2024, 12:21 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
PFFFF, planning. Just write!
Jk, I'm cheating a little bit like TGRF using an existing world build ;)[/QUOTE]
It's only cheating if you use something you've previously written. Using a previously...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 25th, 2024, 05:36 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 18th, 2024, 02:44 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
A few hours, right... more like a few days. Ahem, sorry for the tardiness.
At any event, I've finally gotten my act together and given this some thought. As I'm sure many of you know, I like...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 12th, 2024, 06:21 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
I'm glad it worked, because I felt like the letter format killed the tension quite a bit. In the outline, I was trying to really build up the enmity between the two parties and specifically the...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 9th, 2024, 03:19 PM
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Re: Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?
Well, in the spirit of resurrecting this contest, I have an actual real live entry. EL submitted something several months ago, so technically he should have won by default, but... the prompt is still...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
March 3rd, 2024, 02:00 PM
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 29th, 2024, 03:30 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Well my thoughts on the prose - as in the 'flowery language' for lack of a better term - comes down to what I originally said:
I love flowery language as much as the next guy, but in my...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 20th, 2024, 07:19 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
I would submit to you this question: what is the purpose of a description? To enable the reader to see what is happening in his head with more ease. Let me therefore say that - save for a handful of...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 17th, 2024, 05:55 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Apostle's Creed Final Review:
The GoodI want to start with the things I liked about this story. This goes beyond the normal elements of pacing, tension, twists, and all that. These are things I...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 15th, 2024, 08:39 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapters 31-32:
Can he though? Honestly at this point I wouldn't be surprised if he misses point blank.
Having played CoN with you, I know this is exactly the type of thing you would do, and...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 14th, 2024, 08:26 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 30:
A hundred*
off*
free*? You might've meant freely there, not sure.
This is another instance of object-confusion. It seems like you're saying that the intruders couldn't pose...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 14th, 2024, 03:26 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Sure... :popcorn:
I have been presented with the need to go as close to gluten-free as possible, at least for a month or two. Note to self: don't overdo any one food group for an extended...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 13th, 2024, 07:44 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 29:
Sitting* 'Sat' being used in that way is - though regrettably common - not correct grammar-wise.
are expendable?
Guage taking the Yamato out is only the latest in a mounting...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 6th, 2024, 09:12 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 28:
Quickly*
A general marking, perhaps?
This reads a bit odd - the action it refers to - the group firing - is never stated, and instead implied, causing the 'but' to feel out of...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
February 3rd, 2024, 06:04 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 27:
Wait, no, what are you doing? You know how many germs are in there?!?
Another good description I wouldn't have thought of.
Just a missed line.
So Thomas, Brooke, Thorn,...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 31st, 2024, 05:16 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 26, parts II and III:
The*
Are you though?
Obviously this is something Brooke would never do, but it occured to me that they could easily call Voyeur's bluff. He just gave them...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 30th, 2024, 05:00 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
Chapter 26, part I:
Not sure if this is intentional or not, but as 'zombie' is an adjective here, it can't be plural. 'Large zombie sightings'.
Again not sure if this is intentional, but you...
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Forum: Fan Art & Fiction
January 30th, 2024, 02:09 PM
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Re: APOSTLE'S CREED - a zombie story
I could not even begin to say. They are very different characters, and their introduction was so long ago you'd think that relation would've worn off by now. [/QUOTE]
Well first impressions are...
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