Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

I agree that the power is moving into an area of over complexity.
Light touches are usually best. I would suggest the edits above for grammar and consistency.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

So you are not in favor of adding the adustment to the d20 roll for multiple attempts in a turn?

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I am concerned about how it would be interpreted that she would work against "frenzy" squads (or heroes for that matter) or bonding combos like the dwarves. The term "turn" is unclear as to whether if refers to the player or the figure/squad (does she need a 15 to hide from the last dwarf? if enough Vipers frenzy, can she not hide at all?) so I think it would just be cleaner to allow her a 50-50 chance each time to Hide.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

I'm fine with it either way. The additional difficulty of getting away from multiple figures was an attempt to address Confred's concerns, though not in the same way he imagined. It also make sense that if I have 3 or 4 people after me, it's going to be harder to get away from all of them than a single figure.

I guess I don't see "turn" as ambiguously as you. Turn bonding and Frenzy each give an additional turn, so Hide would reset. If everything fell into place, the Tarn, using Berserker Charge could eventually push the roll too high for her to use Hide.

In the end, I liked the 50/50 version and I like the increasing difficulty version. I'll go along with whatever the majority decide.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

yes let's keep it at 50/50 and not get it to overcomplicated.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

You may want to change the wording to:

Once per turn, if an opponent’s figure ends its movement adjacent to Katniss Everdeen and onto a space where that figure can end it's movement, you may roll the 20-sided die. If you roll an 11 or higher, Katniss Everdeen may immediately move up to 3 spaces. Katniss Everdeen will not take any leaving engagement attacks when moving with Hide. Katniss Everdeen can use this power only if she ends her Hide move not adjacent to any enemy figures.

This is the same wording as 'Slippery 6' from the C3V figure Elaria the Pale

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

That changes the power, removing her opportunity to Hide from an entire squad. I'm also not sure how a figure could end its movement on a space where it can't end its movement (so why is that verbiage necessary?).

Leave it as is, since it is a separate power, with a separate name.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Just remove the 'Once per turn' at the beginning to hide from squads. I think that the 'space where that figure may end it's movement' is included for double-spaced figures, but it might have something to do with movement activated powers. Either way, the C3V team probably has the more 'official' wording.

(Not trying to be annoying or nit-picky here. Tell me if this is unhelpful and I'll stop)

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No, that actually is helpful and brings up a good point about double spaced figures. Thanks for you input Sock.

Hide reworded based on Slippery:

HIDE 11
If an opponent’s figure moves adjacent to Katniss Everdeen and onto a space where that figure can end its movement, you may roll the 20-sided die. If you roll an 11 or higher, Katniss Everdeen may immediately move up to 3 spaces. Katniss Everdeen will not take any leaving engagement attacks when moving with Hide. Katniss Everdeen can use this power only if she ends her Hide move not adjacent to any enemy figures.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

You could conserve a few more words:

HIDE 11
If an opponent’s figure moves adjacent to Katniss Everdeen and onto a space where that figure can end its movement, you may roll the 20-sided die. If you roll an 11 or higher, Katniss Everdeen may immediately move up to 3 spaces if she ends her move not adjacent to any enemy figures. Katniss Everdeen will not take any leaving engagement attacks when moving with Hide.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Just some ideas. I still want Katniss to not be able to be attacked from somebody that she hides from.

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