Dilmir: A Tale of Feylund
Greetings, readers and writers. This is my repost of Dilmir, as promised in my blog. If you haven't been following the blog, make sure to check it every now and then, as I use it to update you on where I am with my writing. I will continue to work on Let Go, the first installment of my infinite (and final) fan fiction series while I post Dilmir. All further information can be found in the Introduction, below.
Introduction
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A note on posting:
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@BiggaBullfrog @TheAverageFan @hose @Tornado @Sylvano the Wasabus @William099
The repost of Dilmir is now live! ~TGRF. |
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So far so good TGRF, save for one instance of "wait, who's talking right now?" with that end paragraph. Otherwise an intriguing start. I must admit, for all the mention of Dilmir, I never really knew anything about it, so I will be very interested in checking out one of your cornerstone fics. Certainly if Sonic.exe is getting a remaster, why shouldn't this? ~TAF |
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Chapter Three - Tales of Darkness is now live! The mystery of Dilmir grows as the story of ancient enemy is revealed.
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Chapter Four - To Form a Spell is now live! The mysterious magic which defines the elves is seen for the first time, and part of the mystery of Dilmir begins to become clearer...
Also, I have added the glossary to the menu on the site. However, I have hidden it because 1) it is not super necessary yet, and 2) there are a few spoilers in it. I'll unhide it when the Elvish starts coming thick and fast. :twisted: ~TGRF, still intending to post the map. |
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I am keeping up-to-date, even if I don't comment.
For the map's quadrants, which way is "forward" and "backward"? I assume it means east and west since there's no referral to that but there is for north and south. ~TAF |
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Spoiler for previous chapter:
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Chapter Seven - Changes is now live! After the actions of Alfimir, Dilmir tries to return to his normal life, but finds that doing so will be much harder than before - if indeed it is even possible anymore.
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Chapter Eight - Unseen Suspicions is now live! As Dilmir struggles with his magic, plots form in the shadows and darkness. Soon, everything is bound to come to a head...
~TGRF. EDIT: Also, concerning BaoP, I've opted to work more on the stakes, since I discovered that they were lacking definition. Once they are more firmly in place, I will create the chapter outline and then begin writing. |
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Chapter Nine - A Dark Duel is now live! Dilmir's power threatens to undo all he has done in his time at Eld'rin, and external forces of darkness move closer. One can only speculate what will happen next....
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Chapter Ten - Blade of Shadow, Elf of Darkness is now live! The unseen becomes real as Dilmir is forced once more to use his magic to defend himself. Will he determine who his enemies truly are in time?
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Chapter Eleven - A Lack of Sleep is now live! Dilmir begins to guess just how far the council will go to have him banished. With all of Eld'rin against him, can he even continue the life he has lived until now?
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I seem to have briefly forgotten about this. The real question is, O silent viewers... Have you?
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So....
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EL slowly peeks around the door, his eyes following the example of his nose, he takes in his surroundings and creeps into the room pretending, for all the world, that he'd been there the whole time.
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Hahaha, how are you, my friend?
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Found it!
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Sorry for the silence! As I'm sure you'll see from other posts earth (and azeroth) has kept me away from Valhalla...
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So, about this... It seems that I need input to keep me interested in posting. Which is really messed up, considering that TAF was able to plow through an entire fan fiction with basically zero comments. Passing over that though, is there interest in me continuing this? I kind of assumed there wasn't when I forgot to post for a few days and no one complained. ;) ~TGRF. |
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Yes there is interest!
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On with the chapters then.
If you follow the 3-act structure, there's a point half way through a story (referred to as the midpoint). The midpoint is usually a big twist, or a turning point, where things change. It's usually what everything before it has been building up to, and everything after it is irrevocably changed, as the protagonist races towards the climax, unable to stop their approaching doom. The 3-act structure was never something I used until very recently. Despite this, Dilmir has that midpoint, the moment which changes everything. And it's in this chapter. I give you: Chapter Twelve - A Red Sun ~TGRF. |
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Apparently I hadn't yet subscribed. A fatal oversight on my part!
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Chapter Fourteen - The Chill of a Cell is now live! Also, because chapter 14 is very short, I've also posted Chapter Fifteen - Banishment. No longer able to hide it, the mystery surrounding Dilmir finally is revealed.
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Chapter Sixteen - Bloodline is now live! I will also be releasing the glossary along with the next chapter, most likely tomorrow.
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Man I forgot how much I love these stories :)
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Okay--I'm finally all caught up, and I can say with certainty that things are getting interesting now.
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Sorry about the delay. Chapter Seventeen - A Familiar Tale is now live! The shadowy tale of Eltuthar the black is finally uncovered, as Dilmir continues his banishment.
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Chapter Eighteen - The Choice has been Made is now live! Dilmir's banishment continues, but his troubles are far from ended.
Also, as promised, the Glossary is now public, and can be found at the top of the drop down for the fan fiction. I withheld it until now because there was a spoiler to the fact that Dilmir eventually met up with Eltuthar. I don't think any other spoilers can be ascertained from it now. When I first posted this, I remember there being some confusion about who was who and such, so if something isn't clear, don't hesitate to ask. ~TGRF. |
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Such a great chapter title!
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Chapter Nineteen - Tidings is now live! Things switch to Ilrin, and the full scale of the fate approaching Dilmir begins to be unraveled.
~TGRF. |
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Woot woot! Ilrin is such a great character :)
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Chapter Twenty - Treason is now live! Ilrin comes to a decision about what she must do, but will she succeed in time?
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Chapter Twenty-One - Approach is now live! The Great Forest beyond the Ans Aras is no place for an elf to wander...
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Chapter Twenty-Two - The Work of Eltuthar is now live! Ilrin comes face to face with the dreaded Eltuthar the Black.
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Chapter Twenty-Three - The Nature of Magic is now live! The great secret of Eltuthar's mysterious power is finally laid bare.
~TGRF. |
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