Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

https://www.heroscapers.com/communit...0_original.jpg

Slice a tomato, because lunch is about to be served.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Looks good I thinks she is ready. Here is the official card with the updated wording.
http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/bfc...nasu8hsezg.jpg

I give her :thumbsup:

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

1) SQ: Period (.) at the very end of Snow Queen
2) DYWTOBAS11: ... with the Ice Cold special power count as (no a) Snowman figures.
3)IF: ... friend figure on snow or ice (no a; no space) within 6 ... [optional, to mirror Snow Queen]
3b) Do we need to specify " Clear sight isn't needed. " ?

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

I'M BACK!!!

Sorry to have been on such a hiatus, I see you finished William! I like the final draft, really cool. And I see we are working on Elsa now... Care to catch me up on what has been established so far?

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

She's basically finalized.

She was based off an existing card that needed some oomph.
Before she made the area snowy. we increased that by 1 and made her attack stronger versus things on snow.
Before she could bring back destroyed elementals. not much changed with that, we tightened wording.
Before she had a renamed stealth dodge. We made it more thematic. It now acts like a fortress for those within snow.

A sample final card was recently given, but there were some typos.

A thing to put input on is in the third special power. It originally said ice or snow spaces; I'm thinking the word "spaces" could be removed.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

The last sentence of Do You Want to Build a Snowman? is missing words and needs to be fixed.

I know the last version we had said I think that should be changed to Considered to me seems more official than counts but that's my only gripe. Other than that I think she looks good.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Ok corrected typos and changed count to considered.

http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/e49...l5xcrlb2zg.jpg

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

it's not letting me reply with quote

I like and prefer "considered" - Greater Ice Elemental uses it and thus it is supported format (count is Magic: the Gathering, I think)

Card is good except ice fortress needs a "-" to connect "non" and "adjacent"

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Other than the missing hyphen. Let's put her up for vote. Is she done. I say :thumbsup:

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

I agree. :thumbsup:

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

As do I. :thumbsup:

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

:up:

And she's done!

Who's next?!