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Re: My first Post and my first two customs
Let me know peoples thoughts on them, pointwise, wording wise, etc. Im working on a few other customs as well(mostly filling in some squads that seem to be missing like lackey henchmen etc, as well as a "Heroes" set) as well as some terrain projects. Love the game and look forward to being a part of this community.
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Re: My first Post and my first two customs
edit: Card moved to first post
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Re: My first Post and my first two customs
These are some nice first time customs.
PS: you can just edit your first post to fit the new editions. |
Re: My first Post and my first two customs
Thanks, I do alot of board game design stuff for fun, and the impressive collection available on here drove me to want to contribute....And mojos figures just too cool not to have out there.
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Re: My first Post and my first two customs
Welcome to the site!
Great customs. I especially like the Mojo power. You could simplify the wording by just adding "As long as there are no figures currently in the Mojoverse..." to the beginning. Then you don't need the other line about when the player can or cannot use it. You should also specify if the moved figures take leaving engagement strikes, and you should specify that the players must take one of their own army cards, not just any army card in the game. For Spiral, the correct formatting should indicate range and strength at the top, next to the words Special Attack. Special Attack Six Arm Attack Range 1 Attack 2 When Spiral uses this attack, she may attack any or all figures adjacent to her. You might add a line to Mr Fixit that indicates that "If you draft him, you may not also draft The Incredible Hulk" to avoid the chance of having two Hulks on the same team. And lastly, Can you clarify what you meant on the Dreadnaught's freezing power? You say the targeted army card can remove a freeze marker once per turn before placing orders... Do you mean once per round? Or do you mean once per turn, before revealing order markers? Great looking cards! |
Re: My first Post and my first two customs
>Great customs. I especially like the Mojo power. You could simplify the >wording by just adding "As long as there are no figures currently in the >Mojoverse..." to the beginning. Then you don't need the other line about >when the player can or cannot use it. You should also specify if the moved >figures take leaving engagement strikes, and you should specify that the >players must take one of their own army cards, not just any army card in >the game.
You make some good points here on the wording. I was trying to word it in a way so that mojo had a max of two army cards in the mojoverse. Ill reword it taking into your advice and points tonite. >For Spiral, the correct formatting should indicate range and strength at the >top, next to the words Special Attack. >Special Attack >Six Arm Attack >Range 1 Attack 2 >When Spiral uses this attack, she may attack any or all figures adjacent to >her. >You might add a line to Mr Fixit that indicates that "If you draft him, you >may not also draft The Incredible Hulk" to avoid the chance of having two >Hulks on the same team. >Totally correct, too many hulks can be a scary thing. >And lastly, >Can you clarify what you meant on the Dreadnaught's freezing power? You >say the targeted army card can remove a freeze marker once per turn >before placing orders... Do you mean once per round? Or do you mean once >per turn, before revealing order markers? Before revealing counters. Ill reword that too.. >Great looking cards![/quote] Thanks for the good words and the good points. Ill make some adjustments and repost tonite or tommorow, as well as a couple of squads and common heros im doing(parademon troopers, DEO agents, conartist etc...) |
Re: markb97402's customs updated 1/22/09
With some interest in NM24 showing up again, i thought i'd make a new card i've been meaning to make, and clean up my other cards in case any are deemed worthy of judgment
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Re: markb97402's customs updated 1/22/09
i realized that the card i was most hoping to se get judged was not even up, so here is the pardemon troopers as well
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Re: markb97402's customs updated 1/22/09
All I see is red x's.
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Re: markb97402's customs updated 1/22/09
does anyone else have that problem?
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Re: markb97402's customs updated 1/22/09
Surprisingly, no.
And my computer has trouble downloading the picters all the time. |
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