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Confred October 25th, 2017 11:39 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
https://www.heroscapers.com/communit...0_original.jpg

Slice a tomato, because lunch is about to be served.

JC McMinis October 26th, 2017 09:00 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
Looks good I thinks she is ready. Here is the official card with the updated wording.
http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/bfc...nasu8hsezg.jpg

I give her :thumbsup:

Confred October 26th, 2017 11:47 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
1) SQ: Period (.) at the very end of Snow Queen
2) DYWTOBAS11: ... with the Ice Cold special power count as (no a) Snowman figures.
3)IF: ... friend figure on snow or ice (no a; no space) within 6 ... [optional, to mirror Snow Queen]
3b) Do we need to specify " Clear sight isn't needed. " ?

CJofCourse October 29th, 2017 01:00 AM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
I'M BACK!!!

Sorry to have been on such a hiatus, I see you finished William! I like the final draft, really cool. And I see we are working on Elsa now... Care to catch me up on what has been established so far?

Confred October 29th, 2017 01:45 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by CJtheMighty (Post 2166712)
I'M BACK!!!

Sorry to have been on such a hiatus, I see you finished William! I like the final draft, really cool. And I see we are working on Elsa now... Care to catch me up on what has been established so far?

She's basically finalized.

She was based off an existing card that needed some oomph.
Before she made the area snowy. we increased that by 1 and made her attack stronger versus things on snow.
Before she could bring back destroyed elementals. not much changed with that, we tightened wording.
Before she had a renamed stealth dodge. We made it more thematic. It now acts like a fortress for those within snow.

A sample final card was recently given, but there were some typos.

A thing to put input on is in the third special power. It originally said ice or snow spaces; I'm thinking the word "spaces" could be removed.

McHotcakes October 29th, 2017 01:54 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JC McMinis (Post 2166504)
Looks good I thinks she is ready. Here is the official card with the updated wording.
http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/bfc...nasu8hsezg.jpg

I give her :thumbsup:

The last sentence of Do You Want to Build a Snowman? is missing words and needs to be fixed.

I know the last version we had said
Quote:

Elementals "count" as a snowman.
I think that should be changed to
Quote:

Elementals are consider to be a snowman
Considered to me seems more official than counts but that's my only gripe. Other than that I think she looks good.

JC McMinis October 30th, 2017 09:00 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
Ok corrected typos and changed count to considered.

http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/e49...l5xcrlb2zg.jpg

Confred October 30th, 2017 11:25 PM

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it's not letting me reply with quote

I like and prefer "considered" - Greater Ice Elemental uses it and thus it is supported format (count is Magic: the Gathering, I think)

Card is good except ice fortress needs a "-" to connect "non" and "adjacent"

JC McMinis November 1st, 2017 06:41 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
Other than the missing hyphen. Let's put her up for vote. Is she done. I say :thumbsup:

McHotcakes November 1st, 2017 10:42 PM

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I agree. :thumbsup:

Zetsubo November 2nd, 2017 12:35 AM

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As do I. :thumbsup:

Confred November 2nd, 2017 01:51 PM

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 
:up:

And she's done!

Who's next?!


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