Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Actually I think @TREX bowed out of the project after Doofenshmirtz.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

@JC McMinis , @Confred , true, I did bow out. I will still come by to leave you guys some comments and praise from time to time, even if I don't have the time to participate.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

For Break and Throw I think we should specify that it adds 3 to his range until the end of his turn. The way it's written now it implies that it adds 3 permanently.

For Water Fear Fighting I think we should add a phrase saying "roll each attack separately" just to avoid any possible confusion.

And my last thought. Do we want him to be a large figure? I'm okay with fudging the numbers to make him a size 6, but saying he's a large figure is pushing it imo.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

All powers end at the turn unless stated otherwise.

Good catch; how about:

WATER FEAR FIGHTING
Before entering a water space, Ookla must roll an attack die. If he rolls a skull, he must stop moving and attack all figures adjacent to him. Roll each attack separately.

But you're correct with the size. I had postulated "Large" was a part of his character. But I've since thought of Major Q10, who is Large 6 and Ookla is certainly not that size.
Size 5

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Updated:

OOKLA, THE MOK
BREAK AND THROW
Before attacking, you may choose one Common figure or Destructible Object that is adjacent to Ookla, and destroy it to add 3 to Ookla's Range value.

WATER FEAR FIGHTING
Before entering a water space, Ookla must roll an attack die. If he rolls a skull, he must stop moving and attack all figures adjacent to him. Roll each attack separately.

STEALTH LEAP 15
Instead of his normal move, Ookla may use Stealth Leap 15. Stealth Leap 15 has a move of 3. When counting spaces for Stealth Leap 15, ignore elevations. Ookla may leap over water without stopping, pass over figures without becoming engaged, and leap over obstacles such as ruins. Ookla may not leap more than 15 levels up or down in a single leap. If Ookla is engaged when he starts his Stealth Leap 15, he will not take any leaving engagement attacks.

MOK
UNIQUE HERO
GLADIATOR
LOYAL
MEDIUM 5

LIFE 6
MOVE 5
RANGE 1
ATTACK 6
DEFENSE 3
POINTS 130


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Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Ok updated card with the updated text...looks good to me. So :thumbsup:
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/l...psaot0sjsv.jpg

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

He looks good to me. :thumbsup:

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

One small question:
Ookla, The Mok (comma) (instead of "Ookla The Mok")?
Unless y'all think otherwise

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Well hi name is ookla so i think a format like so like ithe following.
this
OOKLA
THE MOK

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

So are you saying it should be like this

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/l...pslpvoctqy.jpg

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

Yep. It looks pretty good. I used him the other day and it was a really good design.

Re: Heroes of Fiction: Design Thread
 

I'm thinking it is more like
Raelin, Kyrie Warrior
Thorgrim, Viking Champion
Ookla, the Mok