new comic.
Posted October 16th, 2008 at 08:12 PM by scottishlad5
Ok, I made a new story, please tell me what it needs, to be successful, or if its good for a start out.( I myself think it jumps around too much.)
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You should make it funnier. I see a great comic moment when the one guy gets shot.
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Posted October 16th, 2008 at 08:23 PM by Pickledpie
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A comic does not need to be funny...If you want funny go read Hagar.
Nice start there Scotty...but the pics are a bit blurry and distorted (could be my computer though) |
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Posted October 16th, 2008 at 08:54 PM by Onacara
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Thats why I decided with serious, because everyone is doing comedy. I might do comedy later, but for now I am doing this.
Oh and the main sentinels name is a anagram with my real name. |
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Posted October 16th, 2008 at 08:57 PM by scottishlad5
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Aaron, I think that if you are going to make a serious story, your grammar should be correct. The beginning had quite a few typos and distracted me fairly significantly (enough that I'm writing about it).
I look forward to seeing more in the future after that suspenseful ending. |
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Posted October 16th, 2008 at 09:14 PM by S1R_ART0R1US
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Yes, you are correct, and yes I do need to work on my grammar, but like I said its my rough copy.
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Posted October 16th, 2008 at 09:21 PM by scottishlad5
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Also, instead of stretching an image out of proportion to fit within a panel, crop it to the size you want it to be without screwing up the aspect ratio.
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Posted October 17th, 2008 at 11:45 AM by Roland
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sweet, thanks for the advice roland.
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Posted October 17th, 2008 at 04:40 PM by scottishlad5
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I love your Deadpool mask, but that really has nothing to do with your story.
Who's narrating? All the guys in the story were either Vikings, Knights or the Kyrie. There were far too many colloquialisms for those guys. If it was Sgt. Drake or someone like that, narrating then it makes more sense. But Knights Vikings and even Kyrie would use more formal speech I would think... Brandon |
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Posted January 7th, 2010 at 01:30 PM by The B.I.V.
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