Posted July 22nd, 2018 at 09:21 PM by TGRF
Well, the editing of part one took a lot longer than I thought it would. There were a few scenes which needed some heavy revision, and it took awhile to nail down exactly what needed to change and in what way. So that took some time.
I've finished the editing of part one however, and now I'm moving on to part two. As I've said before, Dan does get summoned in this tale, and I'm currently working on the transition period. It was a bit shaky in the outline, and Bigga had some thoughts on how I could improve it, so I'm working those in. If I stick with it, it shouldn't take more than a few days. After that I'll give the outline a once over to see if I need to tighten anything else up in light of Bigga's comments, and then it's on to the writing.
Some of the suggestions on part one yielded visual-dictionary-esque (or VDE) content for HiS, as information was needed on a few things and there was no good place to incorporate it. So there are a few additions to HiS,...
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