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FFC #104 - New Methods

@TheAverageFan The story is not about the main pov, requiring the main pov to have more going on (because otherwise he would be a passive observer), which in turn is directing focus away from who the story is about.

I'm pretty sure I have the issue handled - it's just a delicate balance between giving the pov enough subplot material to give him something to do, but not enough to outweigh what the main character is doing.

Posted March 21st, 2023 at 06:46 PM by The Grim Reaper's Friend The Grim Reaper's Friend is offline
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FFC #104 - New Methods

I'm very interested to see this Utgar sequel, especially since it must've had some time to develop at least on the back burner between the first entry and now.

I'm curious what a lack of direction is. Is there too much going on in different directions or is the pace just slow?

Posted March 21st, 2023 at 04:34 PM by TheAverageFan TheAverageFan is offline

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