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Frodos customs! NEW GRAVE DIGGER
I know its terrible. I have no experience in Custom making. Tell me what you think of it. Last edited by Frodo; April 23rd, 2009 at 09:55 AM. Reason: thread name change |
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It's not that bad. Here are my thoughts:
I like that the life is high and the movement is low- fits well with hobbits. I like the choice of Ullar for the halfling. I would reverse the attack and defense ratings. Hobbits are hard to kill, but they aren't the greatest warriors. Human champion bonding is good. The wording of "Hobbit Defense Boost" is awkward. I think your intention is for the hobbit to boos the defense of the champion, but you have an ambiguous pronoun reference, so it's not clear whose defense you're boosting. One way you can have champion bonding and still have a defense boost is to re-word it so that any human champion within ? clear sight spaces of the halfling receives one additional defense die. The halfling's name (and you might want to name him since he's a hero) should be slightly larger, bold, and in all caps. Go with a bold font for the characteristics on the left side of your card. That's about it. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Custom Heroscape Card
Thanks!
My second try at a custom card. Hopefully better than my last. |
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New card. |
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I'll also say that he should have a name. Either that or make him a common hero. Follow the adventures of Agent Minivann
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New. |
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I was thinking just the other day about what kind of powers Frodo could have. Here's what I came up with.
Life 5 Move 5 Range 1 Attack 3 Defense 3 Points 110 Ring of Power After moving and before attacking, roll the 20 sided die. If you roll a 1-9 nothing happens. If you roll a 10-15, Frodo can not be attacked for 1 turn. If you roll a 16-20, Frodo can not be attacked for the remainder of the round. When Frodo uses the the Ring of Power, he loses 1 to his attack. Mithril When defending against a normal attack, every shield rolled counts as two. |
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Am I making any sense? |
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I bolded the edit, this is considering you have Wraiths (goes to make card) Frodo, your cards aren't bad at all, but here are a few tips on card making. First off, with your halfling, you should either make it a common hero, or give it a name. It sorta looks like Sam or Merry. Also, use capitol letters on the name and stats on the left side. I like your ideas, I myself am working on some LOTR units. Keep up the good work. Want to discuss anime and manga with a friendly community? Come to DDR! http://dokidokirevolution.forumotion.com/forum.htm |
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You may want to change the wording for Powerful Slash ability. I'm not sure but it seems to be saying that he has a potential for an attack of 8, which, especially for 110 points, seems over-powered. Perhaps... "When Alatariel attacks, if there are 2 or more wound markers on this card, he receives an extra attack die for each wound marker to a maximum of 3 additional dice." Keep it up! |
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Thanks!
New card. I think Jandar suits him well. (hes blue lol) |
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Newest card. Also my favorite so far. Any help on special abilities? |
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