Karat's Customs

[Karat]

Previous Customs
Loki-NM24
Mysterio
Owl
Joker

Mandarin
Moonstone
Carnage
Black Adam

Current Custom

NAME = Nocturne

SECRET IDENTITY = Talia Wagner


SPECIES = Mutant
UNIQUENESS = Unique Hero
CLASS = Adventurer
PERSONALITY = Driven

SIZE/HEIGHT = Medium

LIFE = 4

MOVE = 6
RANGE = 1
ATTACK = 3
DEFENSE = 4

POINTS = 150?

Intangible Possession
After revealing an Order Marker on this card, you may choose an opponent’s Unique Hero figure adjacent to Nocturne and roll the 20-sided die. If a 14 or higher is rolled, place Nocturne on that figure’s Army Card, remove all Order Markers from that Army Card, and take control of that Army Card for the rest of the round. While Nocturne is on a figure’s Army card, you may not place Order Markers on this card, or take a turn with her. When a figure affected by Intangible Possession is destroyed, immediately place Nocturne on the space that figure was on. If Nocturne is on a figure's Army Card at the end of the round, you must immediately place her adjacent to any figure you control.

Hex Bolt Special Attack
Range: 4 Attack: 2
When attacking with Hex Bolt Special Attack Nocturne may attack again if a skull is shown on every die.

[Karat]

my customs which are up for review

[Flame Gryphon]

Originally Posted by Karat

Mysterio

Life: 3
Movement: 4
Range: 1
Attack: 3
Defense: 3

Human
Unique Hero
Criminal
Tricky
Medium 4

Vanishing Strike Special Attack
Range: 1 Attack: 2
Instead of moving and attacking with Mysterio, you may use Vanishing Strike Special Attack. When a figure is attacked by Vanishing Strike Special Attack they roll no defense dice.

Mirror Image
If Mysterio is attacked and at least one skull is rolled, roll the 20D. If you roll 1-11, roll defense dice normally. If you roll a 12 or higher, Mysterio takes no damage and may move up to 2 spaces.

Miniaturized

Opponets' figures must be adjacent to Mysterio to attack him.

Nice stats. There were a few wording problems, but other then that... I bolded what I would put in the cards for the wording. Great card!

On Miniaturized; I copied 'Thorian Speed', because the way it was worded before all enemies had to be adjacent to Mysterio to attack anything.

The rest were just minor word fixes.

[Karat]

thanks, he's my first, and i'm still trying to get a feel for this

[Flame Gryphon]

Originally Posted by Karat

thanks, he's my first, and i'm still trying to get a feel for this

It's alright! It's better than my first...by alot...

[Karat]

Originally Posted by Flame Gryphon

It's alright! It's better than my first...by alot...

well thanks, it's not like i don't have hidicul to run things by first. and it's been edited, thanks for the advice.

[tcglkn]

Wow, a nice start there. 2 attack with no defense is almost a guaranteed kill on a squad figure. Not really sure I like that.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by tcglkn

Wow, a nice start there. 2 attack with no defense is almost a guaranteed kill on a squad figure. Not really sure I like that.

well this is an open discussion, but it fits in with him, but give any suggestions you have. so what would you suggest?

[tcglkn]

Originally Posted by Karat

well this is an open discussion, but it fits in with him, but give any suggestions you have

Maybe make it where they can only roll one defense, that way it's still like their being surprised but it doesn't get them totally defenseless. 2 auto wounds on someone like Thor or Superman is a pretty big deal.

[Karat]

Originally Posted by tcglkn

Maybe make it where they can only roll one defense, that way it's still like their being surprised but it doesn't get them totally defenseless. 2 auto wounds on someone like Thor or Superman is a pretty big deal.

very true, sounds plausible, i'll take it into serious consideration.

[tcglkn]

Originally Posted by Karat

very true, sounds plausible, i'll take it into serious consideration.

It's still your custom, I'm just giving you my thoughts. I'm not even the best designer so you can take my advice with a grain of salt probably.

[Hahma]

I don't have a whole lot of time at the moment Karat, but I thought I could try my hand with a suggestion to make Mirror Image more fun and make Mysterio more elusive. He's not really much of an offensive threat, so might as well try to make his elusiveness more versatile and fun.

The wording might need to be tweaked but at least it's an idea.

I don't know about his size being 4. I don't have the mini, so I don't know. I'd think that he'd be an average sized dude with a height of 5, especially with that fishbowl on his head.

Mirror Image
If Mysterio is attacked and at least one skull is rolled, roll the 20D. If you roll 1-11 roll defense dice normally. If you roll 12 or higher, Mysterio takes no damage and you may place him up onto an empty space up to 2 spaces away and no more than 4 levels higher or lower than his base.