First a bit of tidying:
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Originally Posted by Mzsking
Valkrill
SARUMAN
MAIAR
UNIQUE HERO
WIZARD
TERRIFYING
MEDIUM 5
Move 5
Range 7
Attack 4
Defense 3
Life 5
Cost 220
WHITE HAND OF SARUMAN
After moving and before attacking you may roll the 20-sided die. Add the number of Orcs destroyed adjacent to Saruman to your die roll.
• If you roll 1-15, nothing happens.
• if you roll 16-17,you may place 1 destroyed common orc you control adjacent to Saruman.
• if you roll 18-19, you may place up to 2 destroyed common Orcs you control adjacent to Saruman.
• if you roll 20, you may place up to 3 destroyed common Orcs you control adjacent to Saruman.
ETHEREAL SHIELD
Enemy figures must be within 4 spaces of Saruman to attack him with a normal attack.
Or just adjacent figures.
VOICE OF SARUMAN
If Saruman is attacked with a normal attack by an adjacent figure and at least 1 skull is rolled, roll the 20-sided die. Add 5 to whatever is rolled if the attacking figure is a Common figure. If you roll 15-20, Saruman takes no wounds and that individual figure's turn ends.
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Now, I am not sure of the personality Terrifying. It may be true but I don't think it really captures who he is. Something like Commanding I would think is a better fit.
Range 7 is a little on the far side. But without playtesting I can't say either way.
With White Hand of Saruman you may need to make it clear that you are referring to your destroyed Orcs and you probably don't mean adjacent. Unless I am missing your meaning & you are trying to say something else.
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WHITE HAND OF SARUMAN
After moving and before attacking you may roll the 20-sided die add X to your roll where X is the number of Orcs in your army that have been destroyed.
• If you roll 1-15, nothing happens.
• if you roll 16-17, you may place 1 destroyed common Orc you control adjacent to Saruman.
• if you roll 18-19, you may place up to 2 destroyed common Orcs you control adjacent to Saruman.
• if you roll 20, you may place up to 3 destroyed common Orcs you control adjacent to Saruman.
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Ethereal Shield, you don't need the second sentence, "Or just adjacent figures.", as it is redundant.
Voice of Saruman is fine. However this makes 2 defensive powers. While there isn't anything wrong with that it's just sort weird to do.