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nonexistantnonexister
June 29th, 2007, 10:31 PM
Greetings, I am Thoringan the last of the kyrie.

I am here to tell you the story of Valhalla.

I will tell you one more part each day.

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part 1
In the beggining of time, a land was forged, a land called Valhalla.
Along with the land were animals, kyrie, and the wellsprings.
The wellsprings were special pools forged by the power of the gods to give power to their lands.

Valhalla was a place of peace, until rebellion broke against the gods and they left Valhalla. Valhalla became a world of war and strife, with very little peace. Wars broke out among the 5 regions blood covered the land, until the Zaravai came, and all of Valhalla was united in one cause, to protect their lands from the demons. The demons had control of every region and, on the last stand the heroes of the five regions banded together and destroyed the Zaravai, but in the process destroyed themselves, and forever since the regions have blamed eachother for the horrid loss.


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part 2
Many wars continued to ravage Valhalla, in the 3rd war the 1st region was victorius and forced the other regions to be ruled by their king. Anger was brewing among the tribes, and all of it burst forth when the welllsprings were found.


Jandar

A young general named Jandar was chasing a stag through a forest, and finnaly He ran out of breath, and drank from a pool of water below him. He felt completly replenished, and he noticed he was much stronger and his wings were much bigger, but he started having visions of a horrid war to come, and knew he must take action.:jandar:

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part 3


Utgar

An aspiring general of the lava regions was stalking a volcano, killing all that got in his way, as he walked around he found a pool of reddish water, drank from it, and was filled with power, he saw an oncoming war, and knew that he would elevate it, and destroy all who opposed him, he would create vast armies, and crush Valhalla under his fist, he knew the rise of Utgar was coming. :utgar:

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part 4


Einar

A young soldier named Einar was stumbling blindly through the woods, hearing the screams of pain, coming from his families home. He was crying madly, as he was stumbling through the woods he saw an abandoned temple, he went inside, and fell unconscious. Three days later he woke up, to see a shining picture of a dragon on the floor. In the center of the dragon was a pool of water, Einar drank from it and noticed his wings grew bigger, his mind and body grew stronger, and he started having visions of a war to come. Einar swore that he would use his powers to have his vengence on the assasins, and on the world. :einar:

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part 5


Vydar

Vydar was walking through the woods, when he saw a light, he followed the light to a pool of water, the light spoke, "Vydar, drink the water join the war, go in to your destiny", Vydar did as the light said, and drank, became a valkyrie, and started planning the for the war to come. :vydar:

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part 6


Ullar

Ranger Ullar was chasing a man who had burnt a forest. As the chase progressed Ullar saw a greenish pool of water, he wondered what it was and took a drink, the water formed a picture, a horrific picture of war, then formed words, telling about the war, Ullar understood and knew that if he was to fight then he would fight for nature. :ullar:

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rise of the valkyrie


the rising

The valkyrie's power grew as they learned how to summon the creatures of their visions

Dar the tarn viking was charging across the battlefeild with his brothers, on a special mission for Jandar, to destroy the deathwalker 9000, troops fell left and right, Sargent drake, was running off towards a strange looking creature riding a dinosaur, strange pale creatures split apart in the water, shooting beams all around. Dar watched as a lone elven archer was slaughtered, andas he stared in awe he heard a scream, the scream of his brothersbeing carried away by a giant dragon. It was too much for Dar, he tore through gaurds and agents, and jammed his spear right into the sweet spot on the deathwalker and ran as it exploded into a shower of flames, this battle had been won for Jandar, but he knew there there would be more, he wept for his brothers as the enemy fled across nostralund

dragonfire9788
June 30th, 2007, 09:58 AM
Good idea, but could use some work. there are a lot of capitalization errors, a bit of spelling errors, and not very much puctuation errors.

Mycophycophyta
July 2nd, 2007, 01:27 PM
Cool... Can't wait for more.