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June 20th, 2007, 06:45 AM
Here's a thread for Icaria fan fiction, the lizard people were thought of by jcb231, you can add your to the battle too:
A group of six hunters were about to enter the catacombs of a great beast. A fire dragon named Mimring. To slay him the lizard hunters would need a stategy. One went in a little to find he was sleeping. In that case four rushed in to kill him but were stopped by a stream of lava between them and the dragon. A loud noise was heard outside. One hunter rushed back to see Braxas. He died there from a large bite. Mimring awoke and the hunters scurried under a large rock. Braxas had came for Mimring. A battle broke out. Mimring launched a fire ball but Braxas slithered in the air out of his reach. A hunter threw his spear at Braxas side but soon died from horribe breath. "what should we do?" asked the remaining 2 hunters. Braxas was now injured and retreated. When she left Mimring turned his head to the large rock...
June 20th, 2007, 07:00 PM
Hello, anybody there... well I guess I'll continue.
Mimring saw the tail of one hunter and he roared. The brave huntered jumped and snickered back but was was then burned into a steak. Mimring turned away not knowing one was still left. The last hunter was named Julian(I didn't name him) and he rushed and climbed up Mimring's back. the dragon turned around and let out fire but missed and burnt his own side. Julian fell off the dragon sticking his spear up. Mimring looked down and stuck his toungue out looking at the meat. He was about to strike and then vanished into thin air. He was the first from Icaria to be called to Vallhalla and if he wasn't the hunter would have stabbed him in the head and he would have fell, dead. Julian got up and realized the legend had come true but not knowing where or how Mimring left. He knew Braxas was going to recruit him for the battle known in legend as the Monarch Battle. He left the cave afraid, for the battle was between the many dragon monarchs, among which are Charos, Braxas, Nilfeim, and the great Chinese dragon. Mimring did not accept Braxas' offer...
June 21st, 2007, 08:30 PM
Hello... ... ... ... ...Hello... ... ...
Julian rushed back to his village in the forest and on the way saw the Chinese dragon over head. "We have to run" he told his village after he explained what happened. "We can't run, this is our home" someone called out. They wouldn't agree with Julian and him and his friend brij :?: went to the top of a hill to few whatever was going on. They saw Charos and his army with a mini version of Charos by his side, his son. The armies rushed in and Charos was losing. Charos kept coming back and back. Dragon of the forest, he fell to the ground and the Chinese dragon and the rest of the army moved on. Julian went back to his village and now they believed him, most of them. He assembled an army to hunt the dragons instead of running. Many days later they left and believed Charos would side with them but they couldn't...
June 23rd, 2007, 07:13 AM
Hel, why bother...
They couldn't find Charos but found his son, seemed to be crying. Charos had been the second summoned to Valhalla. They moved on. They went to Nilfeim's land. They were afraid to continue for Nilfeim was the most powerful of the dragon's. He was the richest and the ice isolated him. The cold blooded lizard men continued. Half way to Nilfeim's lair, many started freezing and dieing. Brij :?: died but the rest still continued. When they reached his cave it was warmer and guarded. Julian moved in, "I request I see your king, " they didn't back down but screached. Two more dragons came from inside the cave. Then the guards turned around to speak to them. Julian was still standing there and wacked his tail along the ground and the rest of the hunters moved in and killed the dragons. They cont. in the cave. It had many passage ways, there was 4 passage ways and only a few hundred hunters. They were divided and split up.
Later three of the passage ways led to more dragons and the hunters were all slaughtered. Julian chose the other passage way. He turned a corner and saw Nilfeim talking in Dragon to about 8 of his people. Julian stepped forward again,"I don't know if you can understand me but the Monarch War has come. Charos has disappeared and we'd like you to join our side." Nilfeim turned his head towards Julian, angered he was interupted and he oppenned his mouth and led out a huff and an ice shard flew so fast Julian didn't noticed it...
June 26th, 2007, 03:53 PM
Julian got stabbed in the chest and died a slow death filled with pain. The other hunters were so angry they rushed in and posed a threat to Nilfiem but he retreated threw a hole on the top of the cave. Many hunters still alive. They rushed out of the cave and were surrounded. One ran and clashed spear to teeth of a dragon. The blood seemed to never end. Nilfiem came into the fray and did a lot of damage. The few remaining hunters were able to get away. Most died on the way home from the cold. The rest felt they rushed out too soon and without Julian' s leader ship they were outmatched and forgot they wanted peace with him. When they left the ice only seventeen remained. To not ice dragons came down. Long narrow bodies, big detailed heads. Chinese dragons. They whipped the 16 hunters down into the big sleep. Nilfiem was next on the "who would be attacked" list. One coward of a hunter hid and avoided it. He hoped Charos would be back to take his side. His village had almost no warriors left and he would have to get another to help...
June 30th, 2007, 06:09 PM
It's a good story, I'm assuming the Chinese Dragon is Einar's, all you need to improve on is your capitalization.
June 30th, 2007, 08:18 PM
Thank you... for being the only 'scaper to reply in 10 days.
P.S.- Lizard people, not my idea, and yes, the dragon is Einar. He will come out eventually.
July 3rd, 2007, 09:18 AM
Okay another part...
This lone warrior traveled across the mountain to a plain like area where he found another village. He called himself Gis. It was a lot larger than his and knew he would find warriors but didn't know if they would join him. "Who are you?" stated a lizard person next to a spear as the lone warrior entered the village. "I come from your sister village, we have no warriors, and a cut population. A war has come between the dragons of our lands. Join me to fight them," he concluded. "We will not join you, we have seen no war. And anyone who comes here form any other village cannot leave. You must gain our trust" He grabbed the spear. "You must kill me if you want to do so." Others gasped. "I am this villages leader, guide. Bring him a spear." "I don't want to take your village, you don't have to trust me, just believe me." "Isn't that the same thing." The leader said. Then he charged with his spear yelling as he did. Gis lifted his tail and swung it around the spear, stopping the leader. He swung his spear around his head and the leader tucked. Then he dropped the spear and jumped on Gis with his mouth going for his neck. Gis lost his balance and fell on his back with the leader on him. The leader grabbed the spear with his tail and brought it to his hand. Gis used his legs and pushed the leader over him just in time. The leader threw the spear at Gis and it missed, and caused a cart of fruits to roll. It ran over the leader almost immobolizing him. He swung his tail with such strength against the wall he was leaning on it fell on top of him and knocked him out...
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