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dragonfire9788
May 26th, 2007, 10:24 PM
A idea I've had since the news of wave 7.

Chapter 1: The begginning

An open field in the middle of Crumland

During the heat of battle between Crypien's forces and Eldgrim's forces Eldgrim was cutting down zombie after zombie valiantly. He heaved his axe and dug it into a zombie corpse. Two arrows hit his shield and it turned to ash. Two more arrows came flying and the viking ducked behind a rock. He gazed at the battlefield and saw the vicious and devious vampires and fiends tearing through body after body. Two more arrows came streaking across the sky. Eldgrim acted quickly and darted to the left hurling his axe at the direction the arrows came. He heard some moans and drew his sword. He ran forward and buried his sword into a shade's heart. He gazed at the viking the shade had been attacking, he was covered in blood and looked horrific. It was a tarn named Trey. "Trey give me your horn," Eldgrim said.
The viking summoned all his strength and handed his horn to Eldgrim. After the viking champion had the horn Trey died of blood loss. Eldgrim summoned all his breath and blew into his horn. Over the cries of dying men the horn was heard.

A mile away Alastair MacDirk was sharpening his blade waiting for the sound of Trey's horn. He had been assigned to be in charge of Eldgrim's Templar cavalry. As the horn blared it caught the Scotsman by surprise sending his sword flying until a knight caught it and handed it back to Alastair. The Scotsman mounted his horse and shouted," Well men, we're off."
Horses dashed off towards the direction of the battlefield preparing for the fight for their lives.

As Eldgrim blared the horn an arrow came flying and pierced the horn as it turned to ash. Eldgrim was then knocked to his feet by a shade flying over head. Three Zombies approached Eldgrim as well as Sonya.
"Come on men...........hehehe...........stick him," Sonya shrieked.
The three zombies raised their weapons over their heads when three arrows come ripping from their bows and land in their craniums.
"Huh.............," Sonya began as Alastair and the cavalry charged in and beheaded her.
Iskra saw her mothers death and flew over. She spoke her spell and the Rechets of Bogden came crashing down on to the Templars.
Cryprien flew down and knocked Alastair off his horse. The vampire drew his sword and the scotsman did the same. The two swords clashed in pitched battle.
Eldgrim pulled himself up and was imediantly ambushed by four shades. The viking tried to swing his sword but it was useless against the undead soul devourers. The four shades flew through his body. Only three came out. Eldgrim was now not in control of his actions. He ran over to a wounded knight and stabbed him in his gut.
Meanwhile Alastair was losing his strength almost as if the vampire was draining him. Crypien started to swing faster and the valiant champion parried slower until Crypien knocked the out of his hand and Alastair down. He held his poisoned blade out and stabbed him in his stomach.
The zombies and Fiends quickly finished off the rest of the cavalry whether turning them to zombies or killing them.
"Goooooooood," Crypien screached." Our leader shall be most pleased."
Suddenly a dark figure approached Eldgrim. As it got closer Eldgrim started to notice something. It was Agent Carr with a bizarre necklace ,with a skull and cross bones, on it across his neck. " Good work men," He said." Soon Valhalla shall be ours, but first we must rid the world of those pesky Valkyrie. Bwah ha ha ha!"

Chimpy
May 27th, 2007, 12:51 AM
The idea is clever.

But what does the title have to do with anything?

super kyrie
June 3rd, 2007, 11:09 AM
Very, very interesting. I like the ending when agent carr shows up. and he turns out to be their leader. Can't wait for more. :lol:

dragonfire9788
June 5th, 2007, 09:30 PM
New Chapter will be here by June 20.

dragonfire9788
June 11th, 2007, 01:13 PM
New chapter.

Lower Bleakwoode forest.

Nilfhiem fought back as the bloodthirsty anubian wolves clawed at his body. He tried to fight back but there were to many of them. He reached up and viciously grabbed a wolf of his head and threw it. He continued to fight as the wolves wounded him deeply, knocking him to the ground. The wolves scampered off of him.
"Come on Nilfhiem. Get up." he thought but he was to hurt to get up.
Three marro warriors came followed by Ne-gok-sa. The marro took aim with thier plasma guns.
"So Dragon. Any last words," the warlord hissed.
"Just th-AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Nilfhiem shrieked as he felt a sharp pain through his back. The dragon instantly stood up and roared. He know longer had sharp blue eyes, he had piercing red eyes. He crouched down and lept at the marro.
The warriors quickly reacted and opened fire but Nilfhiem didn't take any wounds. He extended out his armsat the warriors killing them all instantly. The warlord just stood there in shock. The dragon bent down and ate him whole. The wolves tried to run but Nilfhiem iced them all killing them.
Iskra came out of the bush with Rechets of Bogden.
"Hmmmm........This dragon will make a fine edition to Carr's colection. Bwah ha ha!" she said.

super kyrie
June 11th, 2007, 03:13 PM
Thats cool!! Its like this: regular nilfheim- 8) transfixed nilfheim- :twisted:

dragonfire9788
July 6th, 2007, 12:13 AM
Central Nastralaund.

"Open the gate!" shouted a sentinel. A dark figure was approaching Jandar's palace. The figure was limping slowly, so Sir Denrick (leader of the palaces defenses) signaled three sentinels and Kelda to go out and retrieve him. The gates opened and the sentinels and Kelda came flying from the gate at there top speeds. One sentinel was going so fast he crashed into the ground instead of landing on his feet. Kelda landed safely with the other two.
"Halt! Stae your buisness!" she shouted.
No response.
"She said halt!" A sentinel shouted.
No response.
Kelda swung her spear at the figures feet knocking him down. She held her spear to the figures neck. "State your buisness!" It was the first time she got a real good look at it. It was Alastar Macdirk. She saw his gaping wound and touched spear to it. It healed but it was still bleeding. "It's poisoned! Get a medic!"
The sentinel that crashed stood up and took off to the castle. Suddenly two arrows came out of no where and hit the sentinel turning him to ash. Taelord came out of the bush bleeding badly and crashed into Kelda.
"Kelda, rouge zombies. Run." He quietly squeaked.
She pushed him down and stabbed him in the gut, finishing him off. It was her last action she would ever do, because after she killed him Iskra came down and beheaded Kelda. The Sentinels chaged at her but she killed them with ease. She lept over and picked up Alastar. "This time you won't escape........"

To be continued.........

super kyrie
July 6th, 2007, 09:51 PM
Thats cool. Are you gonna include the other esenwein clan members? Can't wait for more! :D