The Silver Surfer
February 26th, 2008, 01:56 PM
Here is my first story I have written regarding HS, and if this is enjoyed enough, I will post further chapters, so please comment, so I can improve on the storyline and general writing.
Chapter 1: Summoning to Valhalla
Swinging through the rooftops on his final rounds for the night, Spider-Man was planning on going home, getting a late-night snack, heading to bed, and sleeping in till noon. He had a rough day. He nearly got shot in a typical armed robbery and has no pictures to show for it, practically burnt to a crisp by a showing-off Human Torch, Mary-Jane is mad at him for who-knows-what, and not to mention, it was the anniversary of Uncle Ben's death, and that didn't make his day any better. The only thing that could make his day worse, was an attack from—
What was that? His Spider-sense was going crazy, but there was no one in sight, much less anything dangerous. What is going on?? Motion. Spider-man stopped on the nearest rooftop. More motion. My spider-sense hasn't been this crazy since Venom told me he was-Venom! Oh, No! Just what I need. Venom. His spider-sense going way past the normal scale.
Next thing he knew, a black figure was lunging toward him, teeth bared.
Blackness.
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Venom had succeed his first step. Spider-man was at his mercy. He could finish him at any time. But he would wait. It would be more satisfying to defeat him in actual combat. Spider-man was stirring. Venom's spider-sense was tingleing. Spider-man was up like a shot. Venom smiled with an evil, wicked twist.
“Venom, you don't want to fight me. I'm in a bad mood,” said Spider-man
“Ooh, the spider is in a bad mood. I should just go hide in a hole until he's in a beter mood. Then maybe we can 'play',” said Venom mockingly, “Maybe I should wait until you're done grieving precious Uncle Ben.” Spider-man lunged. Good. He's angry. Thought Venom. He Smiled, then charged.
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Now, he's gone to far.
Spider-man lunged with a powerful rage. Fist raised, he was ready to pound the web out of Venom.
Venom also charged, but Spider-man got the first blow. Venom flew back into the wall, enraged.
He was going to kill the Spider. Today. Spider-man charged again, but Venom jumped. Spider-man was about to ram into the wall, when Venom webbed his feet. He fell to the floor with a sickening thump. Spider-man was on his feet in seconds, leaped into the air, and landed on the wall. Venom webbed again, but Spider-man turned to the side, narrowly avoiding the strong adhesive.
What could he do? Spider-man knew he was no match for Venom. At least not phisically. He needed to outsmart him. What could defeat him??? Sound! He needed sound! What could....? Empty oil drums, to the left! Like lightning, Spider-man was to the drums, just seconds before Venom. He nocked them over, and Venom was momentarily stunned from the noise, and Spider-man attacked, but not fast enough. Venom dropped to the ground, and did a sweep kick, but Spider-man saw it coming and flipped over Venom. Venom knew that, cornered, Spider-man didn't stand a chance, and Spider-man happened to be in a corner. But he would see that coming. But Venom didn't want to wait. He wanted Spider-man, and he wanted him now, so he leaped to the wall, then propelled himself toward Spider-man, and actually landed a blow. But spider-man prepared for it, absorbing the blow, then landing his own, sending venom reeling...again. Now Venom was mad. He quickly shot out his web, and it attached, so Venom yanked the webline, and sent spider-man over the edge.
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Falling.
Spider-man quickly shot his web, and got the nearest flag pole, and swung to the wall. Slowly climbing, he stopped when venom looked over the edge, and miraculously escaped venom's notice. Continuing, he reached the edge of the roof, sensing Venom, but he didn't know where he was. So he glanced over the edge, and Venom was about to climb up a wall, but Spider-man was still furious, so he leaped on the roof, webbing Venom to the wall, but it held Venom for only a second, since he could easily break the web, but that was all he needed. Spider-man leaped with all his strengh, kicking venom square in the chest. Venom quickly recovered, punching spider-man rapidly in the gut, nocking the wind out of him, and sending him to the ground. On the ground, spider-man rolled to the left, landing on his feet.
“You're weak, Parker. Once I kill you, I'll kill Mary-jane, but don't worry, I'll make it nice and slow,” Venom said with a sneer.
That was too much. Spider-man charged with a savage roar, fist raised in anger. Just before landing a powerful blow, Venom dropped and rolled to the left, and was on his feet again. He punched Spider-man, sending him into the wall. Spider-man quickly rotated, landing on the wall with his feet. He tried to web venom, but he easily avoided it.
Good. Just what I want. He webbed again, much quicker this time, covering venom's face. He leaped from the wall, tackling Venom, savagely pounding him, again and again. Venom, still blinded, retured a blow, sending Spider-man into the air. Venom rolled, ang got on his feet, ripping the web from his eyes. But Spider-man planned for this, webbing Venom's hands to his face, and his feet to the ground. Venom easily freed himself again, but Spider-man was upon him again. Venom released a hideous screech, stunning Spider-man, and he attacked ferouciously, bloodiing him. But Spider-man managed to get away from the savage attack, and started his own. He finally had Venom pinned, and he used his advantage, delivering blows faster than you could see. Spider-man raised his fist, ready to deliver all the rage and frustration from the previous day.
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Plummeting his fist downward, Spider-man connected. But not with flesh. With cement, denting it. Venom had vanished out of thin air. Then so did he.
The end....until chapter 2!
Chapter 1: Summoning to Valhalla
Swinging through the rooftops on his final rounds for the night, Spider-Man was planning on going home, getting a late-night snack, heading to bed, and sleeping in till noon. He had a rough day. He nearly got shot in a typical armed robbery and has no pictures to show for it, practically burnt to a crisp by a showing-off Human Torch, Mary-Jane is mad at him for who-knows-what, and not to mention, it was the anniversary of Uncle Ben's death, and that didn't make his day any better. The only thing that could make his day worse, was an attack from—
What was that? His Spider-sense was going crazy, but there was no one in sight, much less anything dangerous. What is going on?? Motion. Spider-man stopped on the nearest rooftop. More motion. My spider-sense hasn't been this crazy since Venom told me he was-Venom! Oh, No! Just what I need. Venom. His spider-sense going way past the normal scale.
Next thing he knew, a black figure was lunging toward him, teeth bared.
Blackness.
_____________________________________________________________
Venom had succeed his first step. Spider-man was at his mercy. He could finish him at any time. But he would wait. It would be more satisfying to defeat him in actual combat. Spider-man was stirring. Venom's spider-sense was tingleing. Spider-man was up like a shot. Venom smiled with an evil, wicked twist.
“Venom, you don't want to fight me. I'm in a bad mood,” said Spider-man
“Ooh, the spider is in a bad mood. I should just go hide in a hole until he's in a beter mood. Then maybe we can 'play',” said Venom mockingly, “Maybe I should wait until you're done grieving precious Uncle Ben.” Spider-man lunged. Good. He's angry. Thought Venom. He Smiled, then charged.
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Now, he's gone to far.
Spider-man lunged with a powerful rage. Fist raised, he was ready to pound the web out of Venom.
Venom also charged, but Spider-man got the first blow. Venom flew back into the wall, enraged.
He was going to kill the Spider. Today. Spider-man charged again, but Venom jumped. Spider-man was about to ram into the wall, when Venom webbed his feet. He fell to the floor with a sickening thump. Spider-man was on his feet in seconds, leaped into the air, and landed on the wall. Venom webbed again, but Spider-man turned to the side, narrowly avoiding the strong adhesive.
What could he do? Spider-man knew he was no match for Venom. At least not phisically. He needed to outsmart him. What could defeat him??? Sound! He needed sound! What could....? Empty oil drums, to the left! Like lightning, Spider-man was to the drums, just seconds before Venom. He nocked them over, and Venom was momentarily stunned from the noise, and Spider-man attacked, but not fast enough. Venom dropped to the ground, and did a sweep kick, but Spider-man saw it coming and flipped over Venom. Venom knew that, cornered, Spider-man didn't stand a chance, and Spider-man happened to be in a corner. But he would see that coming. But Venom didn't want to wait. He wanted Spider-man, and he wanted him now, so he leaped to the wall, then propelled himself toward Spider-man, and actually landed a blow. But spider-man prepared for it, absorbing the blow, then landing his own, sending venom reeling...again. Now Venom was mad. He quickly shot out his web, and it attached, so Venom yanked the webline, and sent spider-man over the edge.
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Falling.
Spider-man quickly shot his web, and got the nearest flag pole, and swung to the wall. Slowly climbing, he stopped when venom looked over the edge, and miraculously escaped venom's notice. Continuing, he reached the edge of the roof, sensing Venom, but he didn't know where he was. So he glanced over the edge, and Venom was about to climb up a wall, but Spider-man was still furious, so he leaped on the roof, webbing Venom to the wall, but it held Venom for only a second, since he could easily break the web, but that was all he needed. Spider-man leaped with all his strengh, kicking venom square in the chest. Venom quickly recovered, punching spider-man rapidly in the gut, nocking the wind out of him, and sending him to the ground. On the ground, spider-man rolled to the left, landing on his feet.
“You're weak, Parker. Once I kill you, I'll kill Mary-jane, but don't worry, I'll make it nice and slow,” Venom said with a sneer.
That was too much. Spider-man charged with a savage roar, fist raised in anger. Just before landing a powerful blow, Venom dropped and rolled to the left, and was on his feet again. He punched Spider-man, sending him into the wall. Spider-man quickly rotated, landing on the wall with his feet. He tried to web venom, but he easily avoided it.
Good. Just what I want. He webbed again, much quicker this time, covering venom's face. He leaped from the wall, tackling Venom, savagely pounding him, again and again. Venom, still blinded, retured a blow, sending Spider-man into the air. Venom rolled, ang got on his feet, ripping the web from his eyes. But Spider-man planned for this, webbing Venom's hands to his face, and his feet to the ground. Venom easily freed himself again, but Spider-man was upon him again. Venom released a hideous screech, stunning Spider-man, and he attacked ferouciously, bloodiing him. But Spider-man managed to get away from the savage attack, and started his own. He finally had Venom pinned, and he used his advantage, delivering blows faster than you could see. Spider-man raised his fist, ready to deliver all the rage and frustration from the previous day.
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Plummeting his fist downward, Spider-man connected. But not with flesh. With cement, denting it. Venom had vanished out of thin air. Then so did he.
The end....until chapter 2!