Aquilla's Entry!

[Metaknight]

This is my first fiction so please comment but try not to be too hard on me. Tell what I should improve on...

Aquilla needs to enter the battle and reading the journal entries made me want to make some fiction. Plus it has nice smilies!

Chapter 1

The battle rages on and a new power is arising.

"Dispatch the spiders, Woo!"

"Yes, right away!"

"I want Utgar to feel all the pain he's brought me :twisted: !"

A kyrie has found two wellsprings very close to each other and ceased both of their power. A new, female Archkyrie arrises in the deepest and darkest parts of the Ticalla Jungle.

"The spiders have been sent the Sujoah is with them."

"Perfect, Utgar won't know what hit him. His capital will soon be ours!"

But Aquilla plunges too fast into the war. An army of spiders will not be able to stop Utgar's new marro that lie, just around the corner.

One Drudge creeps, close to a small but threatening, unknown fortress. It scurries back to its camp, of stingers and more drudge. They grunt and make evil sounds that few can understand but I can translate for you:

"I have seen a fortress, strange, decayed, old but with a terryfing feel to it."

Stinger in charge says," It must be unihabited, we must continue our mission."

Just then a giant bug like creature from way above is seen and a loud screech is heard. The marros are in :shock: . They have no idea whats coming. In an instant crawly is heard and they are surrounded by spiders and are soon on the menu.

One drudge shouts, "They're demon creatures!"

He is soon engulfed and the spiders leave shortly after. The muscle and bone Marros are now nothing but bones. One manages to flee, injured. He travels to his Hive...

[Metaknight]

What do ya' think? I will probably continure tomorrow morning...

[arp12]

I think it is a pretty good first start :) . It might be more interesting though if Aquilla had more units...

[Metaknight]

I think it is a pretty good first start :) . It might be more interesting though if Aquilla had more units...

Hey, but different Generals will soon come into play and the spiders can be his main army, and I will be making made up Kyrie for him like the other generels from the jounal that have unitless kyrie at their sides.

[robopesant]

Cool I like it. :)

[Metaknight]

This is my first fiction so please comment but try not to be too hard on me. Tell what I should improve on...

Aquilla needs to enter the battle and reading the journal entries made me want to make some fiction. Plus it has nice smilies!

Chapter 1

The battle rages on and a new power is arising.

"Dispatch the spiders, Woo!"

"Yes, right away!"

"I want Utgar to feel all the pain he's brought me :twisted: !"

A kyrie has found two wellsprings very close to each other and ceased both of their power. A new, female Archkyrie arrises in the deepest and darkest parts of the Ticalla Jungle.

"The spiders have been sent the Sujoah is with them."

"Perfect, Utgar won't know what hit him. His capital will soon be ours!"

But Aquilla plunges too fast into the war. An army of spiders will not be able to stop Utgar's new marro that lie, just around the corner.

One Drudge creeps, close to a small but threatening, unknown fortress. It scurries back to its camp, of stingers and more drudge. They grunt and make evil sounds that few can understand but I can translate for you:

"I have seen a fortress, strange, decayed, old but with a terryfing feel to it."

Stinger in charge says," It must be unihabited, we must continue our mission."

Just then a giant bug like creature from way above is seen and a loud screech is heard. The marros are in :shock: . They have no idea whats coming. In an instant crawly is heard and they are surrounded by spiders and are soon on the menu.

One drudge shouts, "They're demon creatures!"

He is soon engulfed and the spiders leave shortly after. The muscle and bone Marros are now nothing but bones. One manages to flee, injured. He travels to his Hive...

... a long travel it is being wounded. His leg and chest lost muscle. Now there's only enough to keep them together. He begins to feel dizzy and hears noises of war, then sees a little fly thing in the air. "Raaaaa," it screams.

It swoops down and finishes off the marro. For a battle is in place. The Swarm of the Marro.


Chapter 2

Back in Aquilla's decaying fortress, Aquilla has gathered kyrie of the Moon Tribe which dwell not too far from the jungle. They are peaceful warriors.

"I am planning an invasion into Utgar's capital, you do remember what he did to you... he burned part of the forest, he crushed your village, and stole your children so they could be part of the war?! On his side?! Are you ready to take back what's yours!"

"Yes, for freedom, for honor!" they cheered.

"We will join this war like we were winning!" Aquilla shouted. "Now go!" send 10,000 men to his walls. They will be trapped and we can siege the city!" :stir:

Master Woo saw the warriors out as one of they're leaders, Orion, and his left-hand man stayed.

"Do you think we can win this war so easily?" Orion asked.

:footinmouth: "They don't even know we exist!" Aquilla preached.


Meanwhile... the spiders and Sujoah are just around the corner and plan to attack from behind. What they didn't expect was an army of Einar ready to invade aswell. As they swarmed from the rear, Einar's army marched forward, "Onward!" shouted Gallus leading the attack. The army of romans and ashigaru were at the gate of the city. The romans had made a ram and tower as they were back on Earth. It broke through the walls and gate easily...

School, later I'll continue...

[Metaknight]

Chapter 2

Back in Aquilla's decaying fortress, Aquilla has gathered kyrie of the Moon Tribe which dwell not too far from the jungle. They are peaceful warriors.

"I am planning an invasion into Utgar's capital, you do remember what he did to you... he burned part of the forest, he crushed your village, and stole your children so they could be part of the war?! On his side?! Are you ready to take back what's yours!"

"Yes, for freedom, for honor!" they cheered.

"We will join this war like we were winning!" Aquilla shouted. "Now go!" send 10,000 men to his walls. They will be trapped and we can siege the city!" :stir:

Master Woo saw the warriors out as one of they're leaders, Orion, and his left-hand man stayed.

"Do you think we can win this war so easily?" Orion asked.

:footinmouth: "They don't even know we exist!" Aquilla preached.


Meanwhile... the spiders and Sujoah are just around the corner and plan to attack from behind. What they didn't expect was an army of Einar ready to invade aswell. As they swarmed from the rear, Einar's army marched forward, "Onward!" shouted Gallus leading the attack. The army of romans and ashigaru were at the gate of the city. The romans had made a ram and tower as they were back on Earth. It broke through the walls and gate easily...



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... Einar's army marched,"Forward!" shouted Gallus. The spiders began to climb up the gate from the other side of the city. The little many steps of the spiders could have been heard from afar. They learned that Utgar's capital was a bad place to be: many homeless kyrie, without food and shelter. Only the rich and the army lived a fair life.

Many were soon trapped in the spiders webs whether they'd be attacking or not. Sujoah flew ahead, planning it's attack perfectly. When Einars army heard and saw of these spiders they hesitated. Then they all viewed thousands of Drones come from 1 or 2 center buildings. Even the spiders became worried, both of them were nearly mindless...


Aquilla and Orion were planning the next attack.

"Where can we get more troops?" asked Orion.

"I can always summon more, I plan on getting this imprisoned flightless kyrie from this advanced planet," Aquilla responded.

Then wind was heard howling :wtf:

"Where that noise coming from?" Orion questioned.

A mini tornado like thing appeared and it wooshed around and Aquilla fell in it.

"Help!" she screamed in a nicer tone than usual.

The tornado vanashed and her with it. She dreamt, dreamt of peace and and a vision of great power. Only it wasn't a vision, it was real.

She awoke to, "I have summoned you!"

Chapter 3: to be continued...

[Metaknight]

Man, I'm gettin' kinda' bored? You guys too?This is fun though!

Chapter 3

Aquilla heard this voice and looked up. She saw what she thought as the great general Jandar but he looked older and had a beard, but his voice was as noble as ever.

"Yes, I am Jandar. We are in Valhalla's future. The war has been won and obviously I still have the power to call from space and time. I have called you because I need your help to win the war, this is my destiny, to tell you. "

Aquilla looked out the small window of the castle he was in. Everything looked peaceful and she could see far and wide. It made her sad :cry: .

"She bowed, yes Jandar, I wait to hear your task."

"Good," Jandar started. "Einar plans to attack the capital at the same time as you, only Utgar knows he's coming. Utgar, the devil he is, has send a small army to Einar's capital, at the golden city. You must send those 10,000 warriors of the Moon Tribe to Einar's capitol or Utgar will be very happy."

"I understand, but how do I get back," Aquilla asked very politely.

"I am wiser and know how to send you back."

"Wait," Aquilla said. "What will happen to us. The other generals."

Jandar hesitated,"They will..."

Just then Raelin walked into the room. She looked almost the same she does now.

"Hello, Aquilla," Raelin said. Her voice has changed Aquilla thought.

"I can't tell you :neener: ," Jandar continued. It might change the future. Then he waved his staff and closed his eyes and that tornado swept up Aquilla and she returned to her old castle in Ticalla's jungle.


It was a short chapter. I think there will be 5. You guys don't like me :cry: , that's it, isn't it?

[Metaknight]

How can this have about 300 views but with only 2 real replys?


Chapter 4

Aquilla appeared and fell to the floor.

"Aquilla, your back!" Woo exclaimed.

"What happened?" asked Orion.

"No time." She was about to leave the room.

"Where are you going?"

"We have to stop the troops from getting to the capital."

"Wah!? Why," Orion wondered.

"I'll explain on the way. Stay here Woo. Come on!"

They flew off, Aquilla told the story and realized there was a problem. After she reached a certain point it be nearly impossible to find the way out of the jungle unless she flew above it. But it was windy and that wasn't possible.

"What's the matter?" Orion questioned.

"I don't know the way." Orion chuckled.

"We have to go above the forest."

But its windy, we'll get torn into the trees to bits!"

"I just need to tell where we're going."

"I'll do it, we can't have a fair lady like yourself in such danger."

This slightly annoyed Aquilla but she could manage. :grumble: Orion went up. Then he quickly came back down.

"Aquilla, come up here, quickly!" he said in a very happy voice.

She heard a sort of whiney. Then to here amazement, she saw a gryphillon, Theracus, and Kyntela Gwyn on his back. She said," I am here to help you! My scout here can handle the winds, come on."

Aquilla hesitated,"Ullar sent you, how did he know, what if we refuse," she asked.

"Ullar was called by Jandar, of the future, he told him to tell us to come."

'Like your story," Orion said. They hopped on Theracus' back. After 1 more whiney he was off. He flew faster than any kyrie and could support even Orion's weight. There was still a small chance they could actually catch up to the army.


Back in Utgar's capital, the drones charged. The spiders grouped close together ready to trap them in the web. Even they outnumbered the drones. As the not bright at all drones walked right into the trap Sujoah flew above them all. The romans charged and too

finish another time.

[robopesant]

Wrong! Three replies. :wink: :D

[super kyrie]

cool story so far! :D

[Metaknight]

How can this have about 300 views but with only 2 real replys?


Chapter 4

Aquilla appeared and fell to the floor.

"Aquilla, your back!" Woo exclaimed.

"What happened?" asked Orion.

"No time." She was about to leave the room.

"Where are you going?"

"We have to stop the troops from getting to the capital."

"Wah!? Why," Orion wondered.

"I'll explain on the way. Stay here Woo. Come on!"

They flew off, Aquilla told the story and realized there was a problem. After she reached a certain point it be nearly impossible to find the way out of the jungle unless she flew above it. But it was windy and that wasn't possible.

"What's the matter?" Orion questioned.

"I don't know the way." Orion chuckled.

"We have to go above the forest."

But its windy, we'll get torn into the trees to bits!"

"I just need to tell where we're going."

"I'll do it, we can't have a fair lady like yourself in such danger."

This slightly annoyed Aquilla but she could manage. :grumble: Orion went up. Then he quickly came back down.

"Aquilla, come up here, quickly!" he said in a very happy voice.

She heard a sort of whiney. Then to here amazement, she saw a gryphillon, Theracus, and Kyntela Gwyn on his back. She said," I am here to help you! My scout here can handle the winds, come on."

Aquilla hesitated,"Ullar sent you, how did he know, what if we refuse," she asked.

"Ullar was called by Jandar, of the future, he told him to tell us to come."

'Like your story," Orion said. They hopped on Theracus' back. After 1 more whiney he was off. He flew faster than any kyrie and could support even Orion's weight. There was still a small chance they could actually catch up to the army.


Back in Utgar's capital, the drones charged. The spiders grouped close together ready to trap them in the web. Even they outnumbered the drones. As the not bright drones walked right into the trap, Sujoah flew above them all. The romans charged...

... into the city. The city was layed out in blocks but there was kyrie everywhere, wounded. Poverty had become of the city, know the only thing that kept people in it was the fear of the orcs and marros. Utgar would do anything to get what he wanted.

"Split into the phanalax(may be spelled wrong, :oops: )," Marcus shouted. Minions flew out of a trainging camp, some unarmored but with unseen weapons. Some with a heavy lance. Sujoah, was stopped by them.

"We're knocking you out of the sky," one said. Sujoah flew and bit the lance in half. He went of the minions unarmored neck, blood tripped down as they dropped onto the drones below. The spiders built traps, that would trip up the drones. Ne-gok-sa and Taelord watched from a balcony at the center building.

"Look!" Taelord said. Ne-gok-sa reared his head and Sujoah flew right towards them.

"Minions, take out the bug!" Taelord drew his sword in case, Sujoah flew up avoiding the minions. Dodging them, and using evasion to elude the minions. Sujoah flew towards Taelord, his stinger clashed with his sword. And it continued into Taelord's gut. He fell, "Ahh!!!" his pain was great.

"Freaking thing!" Ne-gok-sa said in his slithery voice. Sujoah, ready to use his stinger again reared its head an made an earsplitting sound, "Aaayeeeeiiii!!!, " Ne-gok-sa drew his sword but feared he couldn't stand fighting with that noise, "Aaayeeeeiiii," Sujoah continued.

"Silence!!" a great voice yelled in a terrigying way. A spear was saw, and 2 large black wings, and soon afterwards the face of Utgar, wearing an amulet found from a wellspring around his neck, he jumped up. "Fwwwaaa!!" he screamed. "Spiwasht," :wedgie: was the sound made when Sujoah's stinger was sliced out of his body. Sujoah flew away into the distance.

Two Zettians carried Taelord away from the battle. "Release the orcs," Utgar ordered. A grin grew on his face, a sinister grin :twisted: .


End of Chapter 4, one more to go! Hope somebody likes it.

[Metaknight]

Chapter 5

Theracus flies as fast as he can. "Are you shore this thing can fly fast enough?" Orion asked. "Aariiinnnne!" Theracus roared. "He can fly faster than any in Feylund," Kyntela said. "I think I see some below!" Budumdum, budumdum, budumdum, were the sounds that could be heard from the drumbs below. Aquilla hopped off and dived down. "Soldiers! Soldiers!" she shouted. They couldn't hear her. They were too far off. She flew forward. Theracus still above. "Keep going!" she shouted to them. She began to see the soldiers in detail. They had grayish armor with green outlines. Curved swords and small shields. They were flying real low, except for the drummer. They navigated the trees by splitting into rows. "Soldiers!!!" Her screams were in vain. Theracus whinied. "Aquilla! Hop back on! We're nearing the edge of the forest! We can still catch up!" Orion's voice died off as a whistling was heard... whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. Then in ended as soon as it began. Aquilla, confused...

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[king_of_feylund123]

great story!

[Metaknight]

Chapter 5

Theracus flies as fast as he can. "Are you shore this thing can fly fast enough?" Orion asked. "Aariiinnnne!" Theracus roared. "He can fly faster than any in Feylund," Kyntela said. "I think I see some below!" Budumdum, budumdum, budumdum, were the sounds that could be heard from the drumbs below. Aquilla hopped off and dived down. "Soldiers! Soldiers!" she shouted. They couldn't hear her. They were too far off. She flew forward. Theracus still above. "Keep going!" she shouted to them. She began to see the soldiers in detail. They had grayish armor with green outlines. Curved swords and small shields. They were flying real low, except for the drummer. They navigated the trees by splitting into rows. "Soldiers!!!" Her screams were in vain. Theracus whinied. "Aquilla! Hop back on! We're nearing the edge of the forest! We can still catch up!" Orion's voice died off as a whistling was heard... whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. Then it ended as soon as it began. Aquilla, confused...

... stopped, and listened. She heard the whistling again, it didn't sound natural, like it was being made. Whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. Then it died again.

"Come on!" Orion shouted.

Aquilla flew up, "I'm here. Did you hear the whistling?" she wondered.

"No, Orion responded, you?" he asked Kyntela. "No... Look it's the end of the forest!" she shouted in glee. "There not out yet!" she continued. "Is Ullar's army coming?" Aquilla asked. "Oh, not I forgot to tell you. He send what he could to help Einar at his capital. Jandar called to tell him, remember?"

"Yeah, I remember, did you send anyword to the other generals?"

"Yes, but we're afraid they won't have time to reach Einar, they're pretty far, Jandar and Vydar."

"Nnneeiigh!" Theracus roared. Drums could be heard again and the soldiers began to exit the city forming their phanalx again. Orion got off, "I'm slowing you down, go tell them to stop before Utgar's scouts find them. I'll catch up."

Theracus flew ahead. Orion heard no reply but a strange noise. Whistling. Whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. He turned around. Turned all around. Then he looked down. "Aah!" he screamed. "Aah, ahh, oh. unnn..." his voice ended. "Aaaaaaahh!" Bzzuzz, cooeee. Bzzuzz, cooeee. "Aaaaaaa!"

Finish later...

[king_of_feylund123]

it just gets better!

[Metaknight]

Theracus flies as fast as he can. "Are you shore this thing can fly fast enough?" Orion asked. "Aariiinnnne!" Theracus roared. "He can fly faster than any in Feylund," Kyntela said. "I think I see some below!" Budumdum, budumdum, budumdum, were the sounds that could be heard from the drumbs below. Aquilla hopped off and dived down. "Soldiers! Soldiers!" she shouted. They couldn't hear her. They were too far off. She flew forward. Theracus still above. "Keep going!" she shouted to them. She began to see the soldiers in detail. They had grayish armor with green outlines. Curved swords and small shields. They were flying real low, except for the drummer. They navigated the trees by splitting into rows. "Soldiers!!!" Her screams were in vain. Theracus whinied. "Aquilla! Hop back on! We're nearing the edge of the forest! We can still catch up!" Orion's voice died off as a whistling was heard... whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. Then it ended as soon as it began. Aquilla, confused...

... stopped, and listened. She heard the whistling again, it didn't sound natural, like it was being made. Whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. Then it died again.

"Come on!" Orion shouted.

Aquilla flew up, "I'm here. Did you hear the whistling?" she wondered.

"No, Orion responded, you?" he asked Kyntela. "No... Look it's the end of the forest!" she shouted in glee. "There not out yet!" she continued. "Is Ullar's army coming?" Aquilla asked. "Oh, not I forgot to tell you. He send what he could to help Einar at his capital. Jandar called to tell him, remember?"

"Yeah, I remember, did you send anyword to the other generals?"

"Yes, but we're afraid they won't have time to reach Einar, they're pretty far, Jandar and Vydar."

"Nnneeiigh!" Theracus roared. Drums could be heard again and the soldiers began to exit the city forming their phanalx again. Orion got off, "I'm slowing you down, go tell them to stop before Utgar's scouts find them. I'll catch up."

Theracus flew ahead. Orion heard no reply but a strange noise. Whistling. Whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt. He turned around. Turned all around. Then he looked down. "Aah!" he screamed. "Aah, ahh, oh. unnn..." his voice ended. "Aaaaaaahh!" Bzzuzz, cooeee. Bzzuzz, cooeee. "Aaaaaaa!"

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Orion's screams ended with moans of pain. Then he fell to the ground, hitting hard and precise. He looked up, the best he could. He saw a marro, weilding a living weapon, it was hooked onto Orion, draining his life. Another sting, he saw energy being drained from the marro, he saw it going into his weapon, then a little faster. "Aahaha!" the marro screached. Too much life was drained and he fell dead. Orion in shock(littleraly :lol: ) tried to get up, but couldn't. Then he heard the whistling. Whisisisisistttisshishiwhaaaaishishtt, it was louder now. The ground below him shook. "Help," Orion said. He felt something slimy fall on him, he reconized it as saliva? He could hear loud breathing, "huu, huu," they sounded. Orion looked up. He gazed into the colorless(again, literally) eyes of a giant marro. Then he saw a spear and felt a sharp pain. "uah, uah!" he moaned. The spear was through him. With enough force it broke through his armor and farther into his skull, farther the ground. Orion died :pity: . Then the monster, it marched on.

Back up above the trees, Aquilla was nearing the edge, so close she could spit on it. Theracus flew down. The drumming was really loud now. "bubaboom!" they sounded. "Stop!" Aquilla helded. The drumming was paused. Ruckus could be heard. Aquilla was then saw by the faces of the soldiers.

"Aquilla!" the leader called. "What... what are you doing here?"

"You must stop! I have recieved word that Einar's capital will be attacked!"

"Einar, why should we care about him?" one soldier asked.

"I've seen Jandar, he has asked it of me," Aquilla continued. Whispers were heard at the sound of this news.

"We must go to the city!" he asked it of me.

"We'll never make it to Einar's golden city?" the general said.

"We can try, we are closer than the other generals are. Einar need this help! We can cut around the forest, avoid Utgar's land, it won't take very long, please!"

"Aquilla, if it shouldn't take us long, why haven't Utgar's armies made it there?"

"Utgar's armies haven't past here. Einar is attacking Utgar's capital, same as us. He will send them right after the battle."

"It would be better to defeat Utgar, than to save Einar?" the leader argued.

"Please! I ask this of you! We need all the help we can get, that means Einar!"

Kyntela flew down with Theracus. "Friends, Ullar has told me, Utgar's armies are more powerful than ever, he plans to defeat Einar and then swarm his capital. We must use team work, brute force won't stop Utgar. He has other points, other cities just as great as his capital. Please, we must!"

"Fine, Aquilla, but how do you know his armies haven't past here? And where is Orion?"

Aquilla responded, "I know Utgar, I know his brains, his mind, how he thinks. Trust me, they aren't past here. And Orion, he should be around hear.

Whisisistttishiwhaaaishishttt... "What's that noise," a soldier asked. The ground rumbled and evil cries were heard. The army of the moon tribe was soon surrounded by Marro Stingers, Nagrub, and non other than, Tor-Kul-Na! End of Chapter 5.

I changed my mind, I will probably make 6 or 7 chapters :wink: . Comments, thoughts?

[heroscaper314]

it just gets better!

I concur.

[king_of_feylund123]

the plot thickens!

[Metaknight]

Chapter 6

The soldiers formed their formation again. A sort of square formation, moving as one. They had they're sheilds out so it was mostly like this; deal with their swords or they're sheilds. Then when 1 fell it was replaced with another one from deeper within the square. Kinda' like a phanalx. They were greatly outnumbered.

The Stingers zapped their their sheilds mostly, ca-ching! The spear of Tor-Kul-Na clashed with the swords, ca-ching! Then Tor-Kul-Na trampled them unexcpectingly. He destoyed their organized formation. "We can't hold them!"

The nagrubs got through the soldiers legs and around, they bit. "Oww! You're not supposed to bite there!" one soldier said.

Aquilla's strength was finally shown. She weilded a whip sword, and the stingers were no match, whenever she killed, she went back up, out of their reach.

The marros eventually were all able to get underneath the hovering kyries. They attacked from below. Then the moon tribe kyrie switched to a different tactic. They flew to the trees, by the edge of the forest. Killing when they had the chance. Aquilla was ready to take out Tor-Kul-Na.

"Aaarrr!" his scream, terrifying. She swung her sword, blocked by the spear. She flew higher up, avoiding his trample. She stabbed him, repeatedly, yet he became unwounded. The nagrubs protected Tor-Kul-Na. "Take out the nagrubs!" Aquilla shouted to the others. A few flew down, flying around, easily killing the nagrubs but they became targets for the stingers. "Aaah!" they sounded as their life was drained. Another stinger died from draining too much life. Kyntela and Theracus killed some but Theracus' life was zapped. Kyntela helped get Theracus to safety behind the trees.

More kyries flew down, one seemed very skilled. He dropped his sheild and picked up one of his fallen comrades swords. He duel wheilded them well. He swooped down multiple times but the nagrubs wouldn't stop coming. He decided to go for Tor-Kul-Na himself. Aquilla still pounding on the beast, and the kyrie went forward. His two swords out in front, right for his chest. "Hiiiyaaa!!!" He shouted. Tor-Kul-Na now had 2 swords in him :nkick: . He was dripping this purplish, blackish blood. "Yyyaaa!" Tor-Kul-Na roared in pain. He ran off, back into the forest. The nagrubs began to follow him. The leader and some others chased after them. They managed to kill most nagrubs.

The stingers were surprised but managed to kill a few more before they were eliminated. Kyntela killed the last one, scampering by. "It's finished :banana: ," the leader said. They're 10,000 was now less than 5,000. "Shall we now go to Einar's?" the leader continued. "Yes," we shall.

They began their new quest, against what they thought they should do, doing what Jandar wanted. To Einar's Golden city.

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[heroscaper314]

great story, keep it coming! by the way, I love the new avatar!

[king_of_feylund123]

great story!

[Metaknight]

Meanwhile, way back in Utgar's capital, Sujoah's stinger was just ripped out of his body. 1/6 of his body was just removed. He flew, over to some trees for shelter. In great pain, great pain. He bled on those below him.

"Will Taelord live?" Ne-Gok-Sa asked. "Probably," Utgar responded.

Soon, orcs swarmed the city. Heavy gruts. And a giant beast. Grimnak. He chopped his way past the spiders. He ran thorugh the city, eating whatever there was.

The romans legionaries formed a wall, they cut Grimnak's legs but he wouldn't fall. "Go Ashigaru, now!" Marcus helled. They were hiding on a roof, then they waited, now they fired."Aargh!" Grimnak roared(I don't know if it was the orc or the beast :lol: ). He ran and on his way, snacked on a Roman or two.

The drones were nearing there end, the spiders trapped and then ate them. Grut Archers came, in rows along the many blocks of the city. The people hid in their houses. Scared. "I'm scared," a little boy cried. Then the Ashigaru, surrounded and killed a Swog Rider, but were then pelted by arrows.

There were more orcs coming, Tornak arrived was soon tripped, by a spiders web. The heavy gruts weren't weakened by the spiders. They drove them out of the city. "Yuhaah!" Sujoah yelled as he saw the spiders begin their retreat. Sujoah led them back into the jungle, far off in the distance.

"Who's were they?" Ne-Gok-Sa asked. Utgar grinned, "I'm not sure, but we'll keep our eyes open." We walked back into his palace.

The Romans and Ashigaru were outnumbered. The Legionaries could only stop the Arrow Gruts for so long. They moved towards the palace. Some Ashigaru hopped roof from roof. They were stopped by Utgar's Minions. Many were speared, some were sliced. The blood of all the kills filled the streets. Marcus Decimus Gallus continued towards the palace. Utgar appeared at the baclony again.

"Marcus Gallus!" He yelled. "Prepare, to die!"

Suddenly a graceful figure appeared from behind the palace. Yet it wasn't graceful in the least. A line of fire stopped the Romans in their path. They were forced to retreat. "Fall back!" Marcus shouted. "Fall back!"

They were going to leave the city. They just made it before the orcs caught on. Many Romans made it out, but few Ashigaru. They continued to the hills. "Should I send drones?" Ne-Gok-Sa asked. "Yes, send them all!" End of Chapter 6

[Metaknight]

Chapter 7

Einar's walls were in sight for Aquilla and the other kyrie. They looked almost golden in the bright sun that was arising. They travelled through the night and had no problems. They made it to the walls. The Emperium guarding let them through the huge gate.

"We wish to see Einar, it is an emergency," Aquilla staed. Her, Kyntela and the kyries leader went, their leader was not like Orion but was still strong. His name was, Lodus. They walked up to the center of the city, up gleaming stair cases, through some doorways, pasted some Emperium, led into the planning room. There they saw Einar, Kiova, and Kaemon Awa, and the Venoc Warlord. The Emperium leading them walked over to Einar, who was wearing a kind of tunic, soft armor Aquilla thought. The Emperium whispered into Einar's ear. "

"Friends!" Einar said. "Why does the war bring you to my palace, today?" he continued.

"Utgar plans to attack you walls, while you army his fighting his. While you low on soldiers," Aquilla said.

"Yes I know," Einar responded.

"We have brought a small army, but many are wounded."

"An army, now that's different," Einar said. "I have been warned of this, I have a very small army and this nice Venoc Warlord here has brought a small one of his. Word has been sent to the others but I'm afraid they won't reach here in time." Suddenly his voice saddened. "They will burn down these walls, he will, slaughter us. I am thankful you came. We are working out a plan," he ended there.

"We shall work at it right away," Aquilla said.


Elsewhere, drones were coming. Not directly at Marcus but to Einar. Along with them, the Marro Warrios, Me-Burq-Sa, some hounds, and Su-Bak-Na.

Marcus sensed they were being followed and hid, in a forest. "Shh," he said. "Don't let them find us!"

They waited awhile and soon they all passed. They were moving fast, faster than any Roman could. Marcus backtracked a little and started going a long cut, to Einar.


Meanwhile, in Einar's city, the plan was set. Emperium were ready to guard the walls of the city, with the kyrie of the moon tribe on the outside, Venoc's ready to swarm on the inside of the walls.

They waited while's, built small trench and waited. One soldier looked up, "There," he said. "The bone dragon! They're coming!" "Prepare for battle, prepare for battle!" the moon tribe leader called. Everyone one was ready but would it be enough to stop the swarming marro?

I've learned to add more detail!

[king_of_feylund123]

Nice :D

[Metaknight]

Marcus, marched onward. He was slowly headed to Einar's capital. They went over a hill and down into a valley. "Grrr," a growl was heard, "Awoooo!!!" a howl too. The soldiers turned around, "What's... what's that noise?" one said. They saw brown shapes in the morning sun. Coming over the hill, more growls and unts. The Anubian Wolves came over that hill. Along with the Darklord and multiple Dumetef Guards. They ran fast over the hill. Packs of them. Marcus saw a claw, then a growl, and he fell to the ground. He felt pain and paws on his face and body. Cuts all over him, and the cries of other soldiers. He drifted off, into his own world. He heard a gun shot, but he didn't know what it was. He heard howls and footsteps, like a stampede and everything turned dark even though it was morning. Dark, dark and very dark.


The dragon, Su-Bak-Na screeched. A sound so evil, so terrifying a few kyrie dropped dead :passout: .

The dragon drew closer. "Charge," Me-Burq-Sa said in his Marro voice. Drones came first, followed by 3 Marros and Me-Burq-Sa. The drones ran right into the small trenches. "Ahhahaha!" they yelled. A few made it around the trenches but were stopped by the even fewer Emperium guarding the gate. Sword clashed with spear. Blood was spilt and Su-Bak-Na was ready to fly over the huge gate.

The Emperium flew up, ready to stop him. The engaged him at the top of the gate; preventing him from going on but now they had no choice but to face him, head on. His toungue dripped of drool and his boney head lunged forward but the quick emperium narrowly dodged it. Kiova, the Empress flew up onto the gate. She protected the Emperium as they fought. They're twin swords swung but couldn't bring the dragon down. He lunged forward again and this time managed to have a snack. He was then able to pass and continue into the city.

The drones were jabbed and sliced but even though they were bleeding to death they weren't giving up. They fought 'til they were headless. The 3 Marro Warriors walked forward. One died from Kaemon Awa's arrow. Then another one stopped and looked like it was going to throw up and then it grew two heads and then another leg. It split into another marro, it cloned. They shot down a few kyries from a far. Kaemon Awa was soon able to finish them off but not Me-Burq-Sa. He ran to the get, leaped over the trench, and then stopped. He got off his skeletel horse and Emperium flew at him. His gaze stopped one in his tracks and shot them both down.

Meanwhile, Su-Bak-Na flew over the Viper armies and landed on the center building, and screeched. The few Samurai Archers that Einar had shot at him. He began to destroy building though. Then a lucky arrow shot not the dragon but the Marro riding it in the chest. "ashistou!" it sounded like he muttered and Su-Bak-Na flew off. Einar and Aquilla walked out from that center building to see the dragon fly away. "Coward," Einar said.

Me-Burq-Sa tried to open the gate and then some drones aided him. They pushed the gate open and Venoc's swarmed them. Me-Burq-Sa quickly turned around and ran, back over the trenches. "Uh?" the drones said. They all tied. Few kyrie of the Moon tribe could still fight but the vipers killed off most of the drones. It was over Kaemon Awa thought.

Then came the hounds. They rushed and easily finished off some Venocs. There wasn't as many of them as the Vipers but they were more powerful. Kaemon Awa single handedly took out most of them, but no Venocs lived. The Warlord came guarded by many Armoc Vipers.

The Emperium were about to close the gate when Kiova said," Wait, I'll be back shortly." She flew to Einar. "We need the Samurai Archers now." "Then take 'em!" Einar said. She quickly led the archers to the gate and they ran through. "Take out the hounds," Kiova called. "Now close the gate," she said to the Emperium.

The archers took out most of the hounds along with the Armocs help. The rest went back to the other side of the small trenches to Me-Burq-Sa. His horse whinied an sinister whiney. And he turned around and rode off with the hounds and a few surviving Drones.

Einar and Aquilla flew up to the gate. "What happened?" "They retreated," Kaemon Awa said. "Well get the survivors," Einar continued. "There doesn't look like there's many," Einar said to Aquilla.

"Aaawoooooo!!!"

It's almost over!

[Metaknight]

Wolves are seen rushing over to the city. Aquilla's army is practically gone, most Emeperium still remain but not too many Armocs. The wolves howl again and Khosemet is behing them, followed by many guards.

They astonish the vipers and kill most of them quickly. The Warlord has surprising speed, which he uses very well to slice and dice the wolves.

There are too many wolves and they burst open the gates. "We have to stop them, they're going to destroy everything!" Aquilla said. Einar and Aquilla fly down in front of the wolves and Aquilla's whip sword stops most of them. The rest, Einar kills. He attacks swift and lightning fast. His sword was made for slashing and that's what he did. "Fall back!" he shouts.

The Emperium fly back to first of the buildings. A blacksmith, a flower shop, and a few houses. The rest of the vipers surround the Dumetef Guards and Khosemet. They kill most of the Guards but Khosemet escapes. He runs past them but the Warlord catches up. His mitten knocks down Khosemet but wolves come to aid him. Then he runs away, flees from the whole battle, just like that.

The wolves kill all in their path. Einar and Aquilla escape them by flying. They slowly kill them. Kaemon Awa, still around is being carried by Kiova over the walls, to the stairs of a large building. He kills them, 2 by 2. Many kyrie die. The wolves kill all out on the streets. The very very few vipers come and kill what they can before they too are killed. The wolves finally realize they can't win and run back for the gate.

One surviving kyrie of the moon tribe lives. The one who wounded Tor-Kul-Na greatly. Still weilding his two swords he stands by the gate. They rush. His swords out. The heads of many wolves are knocked off their shoulders. He his jabbed, and bleeding to death. He kills as many as he can. Which is, a lot. Then he's trampled.

The wolves continue over the trenches and then. Over a hill, in the distance, a figure is seen. Marcus Decimus Gallus stands there, his sword out, with a large scar on his face. Like a paw, a big red paw. "Aaaah!!!" he sceams as only a few dozen of his Romans come over the hill, a few Ashigaru with them. They slaughter every last wolf :banana: . Then he walkes around the trench, about to collapse and Kyntela flys over and carries him to full safety.

"It's over?" Aquilla asked.

"I think so," said Einar. "You have officially entered this war Aquilla. You are Utgar's enemy."

"I've always been his enemy, ever since he ravashed my village, and now he will pay :boxing: !"

The End... I've got an idea for another fan fiction...

[king_of_feylund123]

great story!!!!! nice ending!!!